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Reviews for Love's Labors Won

By : Sentinel28A
  • From ANON - Bluevixen2071 on December 06, 2006
    Wow! ^^ That was wonderful! Most Sango/Miroku's are pretty lame, but yours was beautifully-written and very sweet! ;0D
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on October 22, 2006
    Always happy with a happy ending. The ending did come fast, I agree.
    Things that stood out to me:
    -the brief mention of Sango's father possibly liking Miroku, being like him before he married. It was pithy but revealed a nice little bit.
    - Kagura stopping by. It seemed to short and a little random, but I still got a kick out of it. Maybe if it was expanded a tad it would blend better?
    - Kirara getting pissed when they start making out on her. Cracked me up. I liked how it was written as well as the concept.

    Thanks for finishing!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on October 21, 2006
    Oh, nice finish, Sentinel! Well Done! - and good quote at the end. A favorite song of mine, and so apropos! So... I hope we'll be seeing more from you - I really enjoyed your writing, and would be delighted to read more of your work!
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on October 17, 2006
    woo hoo! Aaaah, the joy of not checking on the story for a while and coming back to numerous chapters. Whoopee! So, enjoyed it, really curious what's gonna happen to them now that they've done the deed, as it were...which I enjoyed. Nice imagery on how Sango feels the hand coverings and how it felt for Miroku, especially. I could totally see the 'Sango trained to be quiet' thing. Nice idea. Glad to hear the other story made you think of starting this up again...'cause now I get to enjoy it too, yea!

    Favorite lines from previous chapters:
    Ch. 2
    Kagome closed her eyes against the vocal gale - just enjoyed how you described the yelling.
    ”Roast in hell, houshi,” Sango spat. - don't know why, this just cracked me up.

    ch. 3
    I could totally see Miroku acting that way if he was spied on, ha. and i enjoyed this chapter a lot, liked lots of the writing. Favorite bits were:
    Inuyasha had gotten up, walked over to a fiercely blushing Kagome, and bowed deeply to her, on his hands and knees, head to the floor, and begged to be her student in the art of cursing

    Who knew he could run that fast in those robes?

    Sango mentally kicked that voice back into the dark void it had come from. It helped to picture the owner of the voice as Naraku’s demon minion, Kagura



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  • From ANON - AmberEyez on October 15, 2006
    OO! Very nice - and also much fun. You and szaugg have inspired me to dust off MY old fic and add (or finish) it. I'm really enjoying this, please keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - szaugglaughs on October 10, 2006
    Yeaaaaaa, another miroku/sango fic! goody, goody, my fav! So nicely written, flowed really well and the characters were so 'in character' they just instantly popped into my head like watching a movie. My favorite part of the chapter was: actually, for some reason, two very small moments stood out. Kagome stepping on Shippou's tail to shut him up, and Sango thinking about how she has to worry about this every time she wakes up in the morning. And Inuyasha falling out of the tree, and Sango's reaction to the grope...you could see it turning out that way even when it never really has, eh? Okay, who am I kidding, I love the whole thing!
    I very much look forward to the next chapter!
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