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Reviews for Explosive Chemistry

By : ryukotsusei
  • From ANON - madmiko on December 06, 2006
    Yes, I know I reviewed the 2nd chapter on MM, but every time I come across this, I have to read it -- so why not review? I am SO stoked for the third chapter!! You packed so much goodness in that 2nd chapter -- I am just blown away. Still loving the way Kurama's reaction sets him up for a big guilt trip. (Shame on him not trusting her -- he knew she wasn't lying.) I am so excited to see Yusuke and Keiko's return. Will they demand to see kagome to see if she's all right? Will they be able to take off the wards or will they make Genkai do it? Will Genkai feel bad about sealing Kagome in there with the hothead when she hears what happened to her? Will they all rush in to find them sleeping peacefully, or catch them in the act? Will there be a passionate awakening for our new lovers, or will Hiei have to grovel a bit first? I sure hope pasts are explained and that they come clean about why they have reacted the way they have to each other. (Those crazy kids!) Can't wait to find out Daichi and the other dude's fates. Will Hiei get to teach them a lesson? Whew! I'm in a tizzy just thinking about it all!! And it is my secret wish each morning (and afternoon, and evening, and night, and in the wee hours) that I will check my email and receive a prompt that the new chapter has been posted. There's nothing like a new chapter in a favorite story by a favorite author to make my day!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - missy on November 27, 2006
    i truely like this one and to honest like all of your writing I would like you to bring back 'A Circle Of Souls' but I guess beggers cann't be complian especially because I deffintly can't do half the things you can do especally the part of writing

    anyway keep writing and love for you to go back to your older ones and update but understand that when you have an idea to go with it
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on November 27, 2006
    Gaaa you've delayed the lemon!!! Hehe I love you when you're evil:) I always enjoy your work darling.
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  • From ANON - MsMina on November 26, 2006
    Well worth the wait. I enjoyed Genkai's response of warding the room to make them deal with the problem. Kurama and Hiei should know better than to trust just their noses; even if the evidene is condemning. I look forward to Keiko and Yuusake's response to Kurama's tale of things, and how everyone reacts to Hiei and Kagome together finally. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kimisan on November 25, 2006
    What the hell you can't leave it like that, I need some smex! not to mention Hiei needs to grovel, just shoving it in there. Did he get lessons from my ex? Aoshi says to tell him to lick it before he sticks it next time! *hands you a paddle* Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 25, 2006
    I love the story plot, this story is so good and I can't wait for the other chapter. Thank you for all of your stories because it takes a lot of hard work and to come up with something with such brilliance; It probably takes up most of your time to make this and I just wanted to let you know that it is greatly appreciated. Thanks and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on November 25, 2006
    Awww, I'm happy they've finally worked out that part. I think Genkai had the right idea. LOL. Now I have to wonder what's gonna happen when Yusuke and Keiko get home. Will Kurama put his foot in it? And when Hiei and Kagome get loose will there be more hell to pay? Ah, the suspense, I love it.
    Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - ptbear on November 21, 2006
    Great start. Update soon. Can't wait to read Hieis' reaction of what happened with Kagome considering his sense of smell.
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  • From ANON - madmiko on November 12, 2006
    Had to read this AGAIN! It's just so darn good! I don't think I reviewed it on this site yet, and as I read it this time, a couple of different things stuck with me. Hiei's thoughts about not wanting anyone to know how deep his fixation ran, but he knew it was only a matter of time before it came to light were insightful. But his determination to not act on his desires just because Kurama told him he should really shows a stupidly stubborn streak, ne? Then we see he thinks something of this magnitude requires contemplation. Doesn't sound like he's just looking at her as a lover, does it? He's thinking permanent mate? And yet he realizes there's a good chance she'll turn him down because he hasn't been nice to her. What kind of a baka is he? Answer: a MALE one. And Yusuke revealed that Hiei hadn't really settled down after his confrontation with Kurama after all. He got so irritable thinking about what she might be doing. Did he really threaten to go to the club and kill all the males? Or was Yusuke exaggerating to make a point about his irritability? So, Yusuke volunteered to go check on her, huh? Was that good enough, or did Hiei show up while Yusuke was punching out Daichi? (Where the heck did all her friends GO?) And I just loved it when Keiko ordered Yuske a beer for when he got back. Great attitude! So, when do we get to find out what happens next? Soon, I hope! That will be quite a scene when she comes face to face with Hiei after what happened! Loving it!!
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  • From ANON - Kawaii-Keke-Chan on November 07, 2006
    Argh!! Please update sooon! I am dying to find out what happens next! Onegui!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - brown eted goddess on November 05, 2006
    i really REALLY like this story, the suspence is killing me, i'm always cheakin to see if its updated yet i can't wait to see what hiei dose when he smells that on her!! those two are my fav. couple and their chemistry is to die for!! so please PLEASE update soon!!:P
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  • From ANON - Kawaii-Keke-Chan on November 04, 2006
    Woo! Another great piece of work! I love the tension between Kagome and Hiei- you've captured both their characters and the situation brilliantly! Please update when you can!!
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  • From ANON - Bree McGregor on November 03, 2006
    Woohoo!! another fic... YAY Keep them comeing and Ill keep reading! very nice too. I can't wait untill Hiei smels that on her hehehehe!
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  • From ANON - Beckie on November 03, 2006
    More please, this looks like a very exciting story!
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