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Reviews for All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder

By : ryukotsusei
  • From awalter on March 03, 2007
    Wow, that was quite the rollercoaster ride. I very much enjoyed the plot a great deal, though you may have rushed the action a little. (I understand, however, the intent was to keep it short; and this isn't a flame.)
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  • From ANON - ptbear on November 21, 2006
    Interesting. Think you should had more tot the story.
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  • From ANON - Steph on November 13, 2006
    YAY! I'm so glad you made this a two-shot! I adored this chapter! Once again, well done.
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  • From ANON - VB on November 11, 2006
    I think that it would make a good story, but even if you don't just the reactions of the others when they find out would make an interesting continuation.
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  • From ANON - bluemoon_175 on November 11, 2006
    Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
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  • From ANON - Lady Kio-tye on November 11, 2006
    WOW! This is like...WOW! I agree with the person that said is should become a full story, I know I would read it...as well as a few other people to!!
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on November 11, 2006
    Well, all those late night hours were certainly worth the effort you put into getting this story out. It still amazes me how you can pump them out so fast and maintain the level of quality that you do.
    Now for part two... I like the way you did Maya, she came across very much as I could imagine myself doing. LOL, I think you got Hiei's and Kags reactions right too (well, really all the guys :) ) Good job keeping them all in character so well. I loved their reunion,and somehow the thunderstorm made it even better.
    I'm sorry the story is finished but if you ever decide to make a full length out of it....... LOL
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  • From ANON - outlawlanaya on November 10, 2006
    oh man you have to write more, does he find her? Is the spirit world the thing that's keeping him from her? I hope you con. this.
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  • From ANON - Infractus on November 10, 2006
    This story has so much potentel. i hope you update it because I can't wait until hiei and kagome reunite and make the bastard/bitch who is the cause pay.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on November 09, 2006
    Well, you sure managed to surprise me, I didn't know you were working on this one. I sincerely hope you decide to do the second part, I want to know how (or if) they end up finding each other in the future. The ending was a surprise to me, one I wasn't expecting which made this all to the good for me.
    Please update soon

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  • From ANON - kittykat54205 on November 09, 2006
    Wow, that was soooo good!!!!! Please do another chapter, I want to know what happens in the end!!!!!!!! great work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Diane on November 09, 2006
    I really like it & definitely want to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Steph on November 08, 2006
    I love all your stories! I just fall in love with them! I really hope you do a second part! I love crossovers and it's so hard to find a good one, whether it's a one-shot or not. Well done with this!
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  • From ANON - Shiva on November 08, 2006
    I love it so far. I hope you finish it. It's really good so far. Well, gotta go. bye.
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  • From ANON - babygirl on November 08, 2006
    well done. I love it. I do hope that you do more. I can't wait for the next part. Untill next time. See ya soon
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