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Reviews for Hanyou Times Two

By : szaugg
  • From on April 09, 2007
    omgosh u absolutly have to make a chapter aboute inuyasha and kagome or i will simpley die do u hear me DIE! i love ur fic i swear i was gunna have a heart attack if u didnt update soon so pleasehurry and with ur other fics to especially this is gunna be a pain in the ass i love that one!!!!!
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  • From adeaneri on April 09, 2007
    yippe an update cant wait to read this
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  • From ANON - ardy1 on April 09, 2007
    Oh damn. You CAN'T leave it there without updating again soon! It amused me that those idiot guys blithely assumed whatever the girls had to say wouldn't matter - okay, yes, you did have Miroku note that Kagome was in love with Inuyasha anyway. But he KNOWS Sango is pissed as hell and he still thinks she'll fall in line easily enough? Now that just goes to show which head he was thinking with. I very much like how her being upset is making him much more whipped than the beads did. When is he going to figure that out anyway?
    Oh please, please, do try to find the time and computer access to update this thing again VERY, VERY SOON!
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  • From ANON - lunatickat on April 08, 2007
    Heh, I did have to go back and read the fist couple chapters again. Not like it was a chore or anything; I really love the idea behind this story. This latest chapter was really great. The boys are kinda acting like knuckleheads but I mean that with love. Storming into camp and grabbing their respective women to sniff and bite was just short of clubbing them over the head and dragging them off by their hair, caveman style. Now Inuyasha doesn’t really have a suave bone in his body but Miroku’s usually a little smoother than that. It was super funny though, especially the arguing over Kagome’s and Sango’s shouts about who’s harder to carry. The carrying pudding part was sheer gold.

    Hopefully both the guys will slow down a bit and, ya know, get the girls’ consent before getting some “relief.” Although I don’t think poor Sango will be giving her consent right away. Was there some reason why the mating bite seemed to hurt more for her than Kagome? That is assuming that Inuyasha managed to do it like Miroku seemed to think. Kagome was still yelling but not crying, right? I mean really, if Inu had just asked nicely he probably could have avoided a lot of ear ache. Anyway, this was a great chapter. Glad you managed to squeeze in a little time to post it even though you are still without your own computer. Hope you get it back soon!

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  • From on March 28, 2007
    update u have not updated i need an update!! please!!!!!

    please!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - serveren on March 28, 2007
    Very nice idea and no one become out of their character. It’s just not fair to break at this point.
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  • From yvonne on March 20, 2007
    yeah i liked your intermission sorry you had problems at the other site
    it was nice to receive the update on what was going on

    I don't think we would like to see miroku go on strike right now
    I want to see the puppies play

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  • From yvonne on March 20, 2007
    Inuyasha has a puppy pal how cute

    "I did't wish my smile to be out of character, Sango."

    Vanilla Ramen
    Inuyasha a more disturbed creature
    I don't know I think Sango may end up being a little more than just
    disturbed when she finds out she smells like a brothel

    Miroku could have taken off the beads the entire time
    Inuyasha on his knees haha apologizing haha
    it seems you don't like the beads that much
    you seem to get them off inuyasha fairly quick in your fics
    had to feel for miroku glad he could take them off

    so any more puppy pal play love puppies
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  • From yvonne on March 19, 2007
    sango smells like a brothel haha
    brain hasn't had any blood for seven days
    perpetual erections and no sex
    a little cruel to the boys in this one
    gonna make it up to them later?
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  • From yvonne on March 19, 2007
    back then when i saw you first post this one up i was like another one yes!
    lets out breath no!
    I was still hung up on waiting for the sequel

    then I read this first chapter and thought may have a new favorite may not

    once again I'll take one of mirokus lines
    "I'm afraid I may have miscalculated slightly."

    looks like your muse went all over the place and is over at the one fic for now
    by the way i'm enjoying and i can wait for the sequel of the one fic
    of course i have no choice but to wait and be more than happily satisfied with all else

    once again another fun chapter

    the celestial maiden good pick for changing miroku sniffing around haha

    the beginnings of miroku adjusting hahaha
    so miroku kept his spiritual powers
    so is his blood as strong as inuyasha got from his powerful pop
    or is it under control a little because of them
    didn't seem to controlled as far as sango was concerned but he just became hanyou huh

    mine down boy dodges sango all fun hahaha



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  • From ANON - shatter the sky comes quietly on March 08, 2007
    Hey, you ever going to finish this, it's too cool for words!! Miroku with ears, how sexy is that? I wish you'd post another chapter soon. I'd really love to see this great story finished.
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  • From Moussajinx on February 13, 2007
    Hah! Finally found this again!! Love love love it! I was following it on the other site before the 'unfortunate incident' with morons who have a hard time READING WARNINGS THAT ARE CLEARLY STATED, and damn funny to boot(sorry, it irked me to no end. Little shits), that resulted in my having to re-re-register here just to give you some feedback on this most wondrous of stories. Your writing style is amazing, your ideas make me wonder what you've got in the water there and your sporadic sleep patterns give me far too much joy in life. Thank You deeply and truly for all your stories and particularly this one. Oh for Inuyasha to be free of the accursed subjugation beads! Your insight into how truly awful it has been for him very plain. And though it was entertaining to see Miroku get a bit more than a slap or a shot to the head, the thought of both Sango and Kagome having to face the music for over-using them makes for a wonderful (if cliffhangery) premise for the next chapter. Have a terrific time on your trip, and I hope you update this at some point. I realize you're busy and have many stories going on right now, so I'll keep the 'update soon' to a well-wishing for you and also a big THANKS for all your stories, of which this one is tied for favorite (you don't make it easy to pick one you know. They're all so very good, just in different ways.) Cheers! :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2007
    :( I wish you would continue this fic, by the way your very funny, now stop writing on your slash fanfics and get back to this one. Its not that i'm slash phobic mind you, I just perfer the het fics. And I am a huge Miroku/sango shipper , miroku is just so great with his lecherous monk groove on.
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  • From WTW on February 05, 2007
    I hope your having fun on your trip!
    I have to say that I've enjoyed most all your stories you've writen. I really liked the idea on this one that Miroku turns in to a half-demon.
    Just a little critic okay, I'm not bashing your story at all: Miroku getting the beads was classic even if Sango abused the right to it a bit. Though the last chapter where the guys take off their beads and learn about mating was interesting but the only part that really irked and got to me was it seemed they didn't have much or any respect for the girls. Just wanted to get on with sex and have it over with. I'm sure that its just me being bothered by that fact the way it sounded. Anyway, you can ignore what I said. No biggy.
    Again, I hope your having fun and taking lots of pictures!
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  • From ANON - Zelix (Not signed in) on February 04, 2007
    Ohohohohohoh..... oh boy, this story is a real killer, i've laughed so much my lungs are starting to hurt, oh boy...

    Your fics have always been so funny to read, 'this is going to be fun' was so funny too. I wish you the best of success on your trip to Japan!
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