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Reviews for The Other Side of Kazaana

By : szaugg
  • From dac720 on May 12, 2007
    Ooh Inuyasha just had to piss him off, I mean seriously Miroku and innocence...... bawhahahahahaha *catches breath and wipes tears from eyes* I don’t think those two words should be in the same sentence. Hopefully his staff swinging display will remind everyone of his manliness and the ability to hold his own in a fight instead of dangerously advanced stages of PMS. I also loved seeing Sesshomaru let loose a little bit, would love to see more Sess/Kagura action.

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  • From Jessjess on May 11, 2007
    I'm typing one handed, but I'm reviewing! I love Miroku's reaction in this chapter! It's how I feel whenever someone points out I'm female. (NO! Really? Well, damn I guess I am!) Perfect (if slow) update! Heheheh! Don't think I didn't see you sick that person on me on the other site!
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  • From AmberEyez on May 11, 2007
    woot! Update, YAY! and Miroku kicking ass, even BIGGER YAY! Happy, happy...
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  • From nomdeplume on May 11, 2007
    I was so excited to see this back up, and I think this chapter was a long time coming. Although I like InuYasha in this world, he needed shown that Miroku wasn't defenseless and put in his place. And I loved that his youkai was actually excited at the prospect, much to InuYasha's confusion. A great update. I'll wait as patiently as I can for more.
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  • From Johnandreylover on May 11, 2007
    Hmm...I just reviews your other story: "The Last Pure Human" (I think that is the title) and I sneak on to the site during my break and WHALA! Another chapter to read. Thanks you so much...saved me from boredom. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling there is going to be a lemon..an angry lemon **drool** Great chapter by the way.


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  • From Johnandreylover on May 11, 2007
    Hmm...I just reviews your other story: "The Last Pure Human" (I think that is the title) and I sneak on to the site during my break and WHALA! Another chapter to read. Thanks you so much...saved me from boredom. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling there is going to be a lemon..an angry lemon **drool** Great chapter by the way.


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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on May 08, 2007
    I took my time and read this through and had
    a great time. It's rare when I really read
    anymore, but I'm glad I did. I like what you've
    done with this especially since I've never been
    partial to InuYasha/Miroku stories. But this one?
    You've made me a fan. VERY nice and InuYasha isn't
    just a uke. Extra kudos for that.
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  • From ANON - ardy1 on May 02, 2007
    I confess, this isn't the first time I've read this. But it's the first time I felt the need to comment regarding the Kazaana. Granted, "Little" Miroku doesn't have it. I concede the point. But everyone else seems to accept the curse, and yet Ronin Miroku doesn't seem to have the curse? Did Naraku release him? Given its power, that hardly seems something the Ronin would have thought of as a gift. In the whole "who is this guy" confusion of the early chapters, it wasn't an issue. YOU HAVEN"T EXPLAINED IT AND IT BUGS ME!
    So. Feel free to ignore me. I confess, this isn't my favorite story - I only came back for a re-read out of desperation for a Miroku fix.
    (Although, I'm starting to get a whole bondage Miroku/Songo fic in mind that might bear publishing here. Hmm... Is there actually a story here? Or just a scene... Gotta think about it...and damn! I've never written erotica!) Okay. Never mind. I will just go crawl into my hole...
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 27, 2007
    More please
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  • From ANON - MaximilianShade on April 24, 2007
    Greetings!

    I only recently got into inuyasha yaoi, having originally looked into it on a Kouga/Inuyasha whim....found your story while I was looking for a well written version of that.

    Wow. You've managed to take yaoi (delightful yaoi), and add a thoroughly interesting framework around it. The differences in relationships and in miroku coming to terms with them, as well as his own feelings. I heartily approve, and demand a great many further chapters be produced with similarly great haste. :D Plus, the fact that you deliberately made this an 'alternate dimension' as well as acknowledged all of the more 'canon' relationships, makes the potential acknowledgement of these new pairings far more easily palatable than some of the 'Well, they're in love now because I say so!' yaoi out there.

    My only complaint would be that you killed off Naraku, suddenly and in a way that removed a sizable chunk of the potential tension in the series. The majority of the other characters (Inuyasha, Kagome/Kouga, Sango/WolfPack, Etc.) are all concerned about what NARAKU is going to do, and how to stop him, and the readers know he's dead. They no longer have an Overwhelmingly Evil force to struggle against, and are thus, as far as storytelling is concerned, deminished to primarily being onlookers instead of participants in the narrative. Plus, their concern about what naraku might do becomes somewhat ludicrous. As much as I've liked your story (And I have liked it. Quite a bit), I do wish you hadn't simply written the evil one out so easily, as it lessens the struggle our 'heroes' have theoretically been going through, to have them not be the ones to resolve it.

    Still, while we no longer have 'Can the new group stop the Great Evil like the 'Real' group did?' as dramatic tension, we do still have the, albeit lesser, 'can the new group stop the nasty evil human monk?' plotline, the 'Will shippo ever become more carefree again?' plotline, and the highly intruiging 'How will Miroku cope? Will he regain any sort of equal relationship footing?' plotline.

    Query: Did the Ronin Miroku get healed of the kazaana, then? One would have thought, if he had it at his disposal, he wouldn't hesitate to use it, and wouldn't have let Miroku be saved.

    Finally, I was highly entertained by how stammery you made Miroku when he was discussing his being a 'hentai'. HOW many women has he successfully slept with? O.o

    In closing: Write more! And soon! ^.^

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  • From ANON - Deadlyhair on April 15, 2007
    re: updates, don't sweat it. Everybody who owns a computer knows what it's like to have problems with it.
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  • From ANON - gen on February 16, 2007
    i read uke first then figured you must have updated this too... so i ambled my way here to read.

    miroku this way is new and yet, somehow right. inuyasha is new too.
    but then other dimensions are both right and "wrong".

    inuyasha as seme is not common, i guess his cuteness has something to do with it...
    but in your fic, it works, and is believable. the premise holds.



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  • From setoswifey on February 13, 2007
    Wow, this is great. I started reading this on mediaminer.org, and it caught my interest. I just love your stuff.
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  • From ANON - Aimee on February 13, 2007
    Eeeee! Miroku may be worried about his status as the pursued, but *I'm* liking it more and more with each chapter! The lemon was so sweet and hot and... mmm. Yummy. Love Shippou being innocent, Inuyasha being so sure of himself, and Miroku being seduced and seething by turns. And, above all, I *love* this story! ^_^
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  • From mihoshi on February 13, 2007
    This story is great. I absolutely love the whole alternate universe thing. The part that really has me laughing every time I think about it is Sango is with both Ginta and Hakkuku. Keep up the great work.
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