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Reviews for The Beginning of a New Life

By : rainbow21
  • From Marsad on July 16, 2021

    This was a good story! I hope you return to finish it!


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  • From seriana on May 12, 2014
    continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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  • From seriana on May 12, 2014
    continue with your story of Sesshomaru and rin which is on adult fanfiction leverages and puts that story in fanfction net that has this couple love stories varies too much this story continues. kissus
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  • From jenn2118 on June 03, 2007
    great story hope you can finish it!!
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  • From Morningdove666 on February 05, 2007
    UM M'am I would appreciate if you didn't hold out on me. I need another chapter to satisfy my Sess and Rin lust.
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  • From debbieganda on February 01, 2007
    Your story is indeed heartwarming ... which centers on the family in particular. I am looking forward to more intriguing "twists" and i hope this will not end up in tragedy (like one of sesshy's boys will be killed?!! gee ... I hate that ... honestly!!!) ... but a happy ending (or maybe an interesting love stories of these hanyous ;P). Anyways, thanks for the constant updates, keep it up and TC! Ciao! ;)
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  • From angelnomiko on January 31, 2007
    wow ... is he going to go back and tell is fater that his brother has joined with scar... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Morningdove666 on January 31, 2007
    I don't mean to nit pic but wasn't this a Rin and Sess. fanfic. There was really only a small portion of Rin and Sess. relationship. I would like to see more interaction between the two. These last two chapters I really just skemmed through.
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  • From CherieElisabeth on January 29, 2007
    I have to agree with Merely Truth, you need a beta. I honestly couldn't get past the first paragraph because of all the gramatical errors. You have a really nice writing style, great descriptions and you could become a really awesome writer if you just train yourself to use proper grammar and punctuation.

    I'm just begining to write myself and a tool I use a lot is http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/ This site has been very helpful to me because I tend to use the wrong tenses a lot.

    Just brush up your skills a bit and you'll be a really great story teller!
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  • From angelnomiko on January 28, 2007
    man .... i hope he does forgive is older brother ... hmm maybe sess should tell horai what happen to saskai when he was little then horai may under stand better why he left ..... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Sorceressofthenight on January 28, 2007
    Looks like Saskai has a girl firend hehehe
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  • From angelnomiko on January 27, 2007
    ~lol~ awww tisa likes saskai ... rin will go head over heals for her .... i hope after they get home sess shows that he was scared for his son .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From WistStar on January 26, 2007
    omg omg ! these chapters keep getting better and better!! i am glad that ur story is getting more interesting by each story!@ i hope u will have a few more chp to come ^_^
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  • From angelnomiko on January 26, 2007
    wow im glad they made up ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From funnygirl87 on January 25, 2007
    This is a really good story. please update soon. can't wait to see what happens next.
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