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Reviews for Accidental Love Maybe

By : candycrys
  • From sanchezdianne on June 27, 2012
    I loved this!!!
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  • From Hirakotsu on October 14, 2007
    me too, i am more of a reader than a writer. so i read a lot.
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  • From Hirakotsu on October 14, 2007
    me too, i am more of a reader than a writer. so i read a lot.
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  • From Hirakotsu on October 12, 2007
    r u serious? writing is nt ur passion? cuz u r really good at it. update soon
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  • From ANON - Danielle on March 03, 2007
    I enjoyed reading your story and hope that you keep writing ok? I look foreward to reading more of your works. Also if you need a beta reader let me know ok?
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on March 03, 2007
    I liked this story. I personaly don't think your all that bad, but if you do then maybe you should look into getting a beta or writing partner you know? Iono I'm just saying. The story was great though, and if people don't think so then they are crazy lol.
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  • From candycrys on February 20, 2007
    Thank you luvme4eternity for catching that. I did not even see it. I did that add to chapter in the story to see how that way works. Sorry to those who read chapter 3 before I could fix it.
    I don't know when the last chapter will be posted. I only have time to type on Friday evenings and Saturdays. Bye for now
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on February 19, 2007
    Hey I don't know if you noticed yet, but you got this chapter done twice on it. You might want to go back and fix it. Have fun and please update soon.
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  • From madmiko on February 19, 2007
    Heh heh! Nice chapter! I love it that Inuyasha already got told off once -- can't believe Eri told him he was bad in bed -- LOL!! So, he's already had his ego shot down. Now it's time for him to find out what he screwed himself out of. (Literally.) I really, really hope Kagome tells him that she was planning to be with him when she and Sesshoumaru got together. If he'd only been patient a little longer... Ha! Will he walk in on them in the act? THAT could be fun!! Can't wait for your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Badgrl74 on February 07, 2007
    Don't worry, I had explicit fantasies before I ever had sex. Then I was disappointed the first time. It's not like in the movies. Want to read more!
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  • From ANGEL2006ASHLEY on February 06, 2007
    Hey it's cool that your writing about sex and your a virgin... I am too and I write about it so it's not that bad... lol. Any ways I like your story and I hope you update soon.
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  • From madmiko on February 06, 2007
    I was surprised to see another chapter, but this is a good set-up for more! Can't wait for the confrontation with Inuyasha! Eri? Woo hoo! Inuyasha's SO stupid!! And Kagome got the worthwhile brother.
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  • From ANON - metoo on February 06, 2007
    I like what you have going on idea-wise with the story (I mean who wouldn't want Sesshomaru over a two-timing Inuyasha), but your 'grammar' could use a little work. There are some missed punctuations, commas needed or in the wrong space, and improper separation of quotes from the sentence describing who and how they are speaking.

    Example:
    "How could you miss his puppy ears?"

    She asked her friend.

    Well, it's not exact because I couldn't remember word-for-word, but you get the idea. I know sometimes certain programs separate the sentences when you upload it, so it may not be your fault at all. If you are doing that yourself, in my opinion, the story would flow better if they were not separate. Please don't take this as a flame. I really like the story, and I'm only offering an opinion to help your story be more technically sound. So, please continue and update when you can.
    (P.S. I'm a 25 year-old virgin [and proud of it] and fellow fanfiction author, so I totally get what you're saying about writing sex.)
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  • From madmiko on January 30, 2007
    I like it! Funny, but as I was reading it, I was thinking how cool it would be if she had meant for it be Inuyasha she was inviting to the hotel, and then it turned out to be Sesshoumaru. I love it when someone writes it the way I like it!
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  • From ANON - raven28 on January 30, 2007
    pleae keep it coming!i love like to now what inuyasa thing when he finds uot baut them!!!!!!!!

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