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Reviews for Breathless

By : JayFiclover
  • From bebecouture on September 26, 2007
    Omg!!! Evil cliffie. I want moooooooooooore UsaxSessh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... the suspense! T_T!
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  • From forgottensoul218 on September 03, 2007
    Ok you asked me to tellyou what I think. I just recently joined and if this sounds offensive in anyway please let me know. First your story is really good. I like it but you are in some areas dragging it out a bit. Usagi has been wiuth Sess. for quite a while and your story hasn't really progressed very much since usagi went with sess. Well hurry with the next chapter I want to see how this will turn out.


    bye! forgottensoul_218

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  • From ANON - bebecouture on September 03, 2007
    Wow, the suspense is killing me. T_T @ Sesshoumaru and Usagi. Your portrayal of the characters is excellent. I'm enjoying this crossover. Cannot wait for the next chapter~!(ɁĹM*)
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  • From ANON - ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not signed in) on August 23, 2007
    I love this story, so I look forward to your update. I know how things can get sometimes, I'm a full time mother of two and I used to be while being a mother a full time employee and sometimes dang it it was hard to find the time to write, so, update when you can and write as often as free time allows you. I'll wait patiently but...(don't let me wait too long :P ) *smiles at ya*

    til chpt 61 and going...I like long stories when there good. *sneaky hahaha*
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  • From LdyMoon on August 02, 2007
    I love this story. I really hope that Usagi/Serena/Cosmos that they'll be with Sesshomaru for a little while romantically. I doubt if Naraya-sama will ever really truly change his colors or spots since he was evil incarnate from the very beginning as a lowly dang spider. lol. And Sesshomaru, tho he was supposed to be the baddest of the bad he was the one who is misunderstood the most. He can't have such an evil heart if he keeps a lil girl with him, a zombie demon slayer, since once the jewels gone he's dead and even Sesshomaru can't resurrect him. However, whatever happened to Kanna in your story, in the manga she gave the Inuyasha group a clue about the shikon no tama before she died. *sniffles* Anyway, I really love how your adding your twist with real events from the manga I love reading this kind of story. Update soon and please email me when you update, I've got your page book marked. *hee hee*
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on February 03, 2007
    I can't believe I'm the first to review.... this stori's awesome please keep posting!!!!!
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