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Reviews for Moon Dark, Star Bright

By : northstar
  • From Eternalbloodlust on June 09, 2010
    Ya!!!!!Great chappies really!!!The dialogues are the most...entertaining, I felt like reading over and over and repeating to myself too...The Jaken involving is prettty creepy but ch-5 (sex-ed) is the best in humour!! Sess's character is perfectly outlined...he is toooo perfect even in molesting, and Rin is just as innocent and longing for love and attention as would a child!!The story is too good to read even though it involves so deep and dark pain in places...best of luck for other chappies !!^_^
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  • From ANON - Ivy on October 08, 2008
    I think you write the most amazing oneshots!
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  • From peppysmama on September 09, 2008
    OMG! That was fantastic! Damn, Sesshoumaru is HOT!
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  • From peppysmama on August 19, 2008
    The "sex ed" one was funny!
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  • From midnightsweet on March 09, 2008
    dame all of them are fucking great. everyone of them was hot. i will give it to you. that you do write the best sex. i will have to go dry off than come back to reread them again. by than my husband should be home. lol lol
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 09, 2008
    I love that you write oneshots of Rin/Sess! Chapter 7 is my favorite one so far and I'd think it would be awesome if you wrote a multichap fic on it. You are very talented with your descriptions, and you can almost envision what your writing about =) Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on March 08, 2008
    Nice little piece!!!!
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  • From shatterwing on November 16, 2007
    I love these little tidbits of dark dark goodness!

    thank you!
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  • From blackonyx83 on November 11, 2007
    i have 2 ask how old is rin in this?
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  • From liliesformary on October 31, 2007
    I just read Lollipop agan (It's bee a while...and last time I stopped halfway in...but I soldiered through it this time. Ug, Jaken is squick!)...anyway, this line:

    “Why can you put your whole arm in your mouth?”

    “Rin practiced,” she said proudly. “My brothers all had to give me their desserts ‘cause Rin won the dare! My oldest brother Ichiro said Rin would make some lucky boy a good wife someday!”

    Just LOL goodness. Yea you will, Rin!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on October 30, 2007
    Please keeep them coming...I so loving them!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sorceress0209 on September 11, 2007
    I loved these, they have a little bit of everything that we love to read, but when are you going to finish the other two stories that we have been waiting on please I can't wait anymore to finish reading them.
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  • From ANON - liliesformary aka HM on September 08, 2007
    Chapter 5 is funny in a not-so-funny-kida-creepy way. Still, I enjoyed it. Chapter 6 is just creepy, but still very good. It makes you want to shudder.
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  • From adeaneri on September 08, 2007
    lol. SEEmen taste yuky. your mean to Jaken. that was hilarious
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  • From theMaven on September 07, 2007
    That last one was TWISTED, lol. Beautifully written with a wonderful flow, but totally twisted.
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