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Reviews for Revelations

By : BJD
  • From kookookitty on June 02, 2007
    jethro tull, 'war child' album... came to mind for some odd reason 'queen and country' track in particularly but the whole lp seems aprapo. why is it that when i read your work i am transported musically?? acid trip flashbacks?!?! your writing is a trip. a happy fun psychedelic trip @.@

    although 'aqualung' is my favorite tull album, the others were quite good as long as you like the flute and harpsichord.

    so we shall be looking forward to reading book two...

    ciao for now!
    peace Vm

    gin
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  • From kookookitty on May 14, 2007
    twists and turns things are getting interesting and with all you've written pieces have been falling into place and i have a greater understanding of whatever the hell is going on. i believe this is as deep as NGE but it may make more sense if anything is possible.

    if you like NGE you really need to check out raXephon on youTube... it has all that good stuff, and blue blood.

    ciao!
    ginny

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  • From kookookitty on May 09, 2007
    personally i would rather be lazy and read everyone elses hard work thank you. i used to write editorials and rants for a local homeschool newsletter and i haven't seriously written anything since i graduated my son four years ago. fiction requires much more imagination and sweat than journalism.

    something i've been wondering: where is naraku during all of this mess?

    reward time!

    a rich and sinful reward for such a richly textured piece:

    ::ginny's rum balls::

    ~grind up: walnuts, dates, almonds, raisins, pecans, coconut, chocolate chips(lots and lots)...add more sticky dates and raisins if not gooey enough
    ~mix in: mini-chocolate chips, 151 proof rum
    ~roll in ground nuts, cocoa powder, or finely ground coffee(hazelnut coffee is good)

    because you don't cook them the alcohol is still there... warning: eating too many rum balls will make you drunk...

    always a pleasure!
    ginny

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  • From kookookitty on May 07, 2007
    of course in the summary you could explain that the story contains many instances of verbal intercourse. for example the summary should read: (book one)continues the journey that began unseen and hidden during the tale of Raindrops. yash/kag- verbal intercourse, BDSM, violence.

    most readers are looking for the 'sexually explicit' definition of 'adult' and ignoring the fact that 'adult' could mean intelligent and thought provoking, or just violent...

    don't feel bad i have had a (one-shot)story on ff-dot-net and for the longest time i had one review, yesterday i got two more. (kokoronagomu)

    ciao!
    ginny




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  • From kookookitty on May 03, 2007
    wow that was some chapter and some explanation! funny that kagome and yash were both 'lost at sea' with it. then again we enlightened bunch have heard of the genesis account of creation, the different mythologies and the most modern one about the great spaghetti monster creator... the potential is mind boggling. i don't remember the details but i think i got it. i will read this chapter again when you update to refresh my memory and clarify any potential problems(i always do that). i usually float through everything in a fog and eventually everything falls into place, i read like i live. ^/^

    ja!
    ginny


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  • From kookookitty on April 30, 2007
    so glad you're back and i hope you had a wonderful time!

    the tama, the comopsition of the tama, the well, the new youkai... i am always confused but it always gets clearer as you continue, and i have faith in you.

    ciao,
    ginny

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  • From kookookitty on April 14, 2007
    *standing up with dignity after rolling on the floor with laughter* >=P

    hey at least you haven't given up! i think the reason people don't review is that instead of the desire to read interesting literature (even if it is fan fiction) they only want to read descriptions of the characters 'getting it on', 'bumpin uglies', 'the dragon visiting the cave', 'exploring the cavern' and all of those colorful descriptions that i can't stand to read... gach! yes i read adult stuff i just skip the lemon, and yes, there really are some exceptionally well written and interesting stories on this site(your work is an example of the truth of that statement).

    i saw the end of the series and i want it to continue... it takes 2 weeks for the next volume of the manga to be released and i need my fix! ... i may be ridiculously close to being a half century old i have no desire or need to grow up. ever since i watched 'kimba the white lion' and 'speed racer' on my parents' black and white tv i have been addicted to animation. (and my son claims that he turned me on to anime)

    have a wonderful time and your loyal reader shall be waiting with baited breath until your return.

    a pleasure,
    ginny

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  • From kookookitty on April 08, 2007
    if you've lived as long as i have you develope a tough skin...

    thank you, you flatter me. my progeny however deny my coolness in their words i am an insane freak.

    good chapter, valcos is quite a character. it still isn't clear if he is friend or foe now.

    ja ne!
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  • From kookookitty on April 06, 2007
    soooo, have you seen 'dark side of oz'? floyd is my all time favorite group...'the wall' is my fav album...

    dark side of oz ~ 'wizard of oz' with no sound and 'dark side of the moon' album on replay... started simultaniously after the MGM lion's third roar. it is a singularly unique experience. (i have seen it without chemical enhancement and it was still good)

    yasha and kagome seem to have been singled out by valcos' reactions to them individually... hmm.

    thank you,
    ginny

    must kill my son, he stole my 'dark side' cd... ahh,'the wall', 'wish you were here', 'momentary lapse of reason'...ahh... i am now 'comfortably numb' =)
    ~floyd fix~
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  • From kookookitty on April 04, 2007
    writing an interesting and entertaining story, updating in a timely manner, putting up with the drivel your reviewers spout, etc... facters that make up the 'well behaved' author.

    good behavior must be rewarded! happy healthy encouragement:

    chocolately goodness!

    ::chocolate coma::
    12 oz silken tofu
    12 oz melted chocolate chips
    whipped to a fluffy froth
    refrigerate till cold ~ yummy!

    a pleasure,
    ginny

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  • From kookookitty on April 02, 2007
    >=]

    keep writing and you'll find out...

    to continue seeing inuyasha go to youtube and type inuyasha and episode number (usually shown in three parts)... watch the subs, they mispronounce the names in the dubs

    ginny

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  • From SapphireBlade on April 01, 2007
    Very well written stuff. Did you do research on theology or anything like that, cuz that intro was very well written. Anyways, I like where this is going, I can't wait to see some more. One suggestion, get a beta cuz you have a few typos.

    Ja ne!!
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  • From kookookitty on March 29, 2007
    your prologue description for book one should be your summary, it's just fine!

    interesting narration.

    glad you're back!
    gin
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