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By : LadyShinomori
  • From ANON - Jimmy56 on October 09, 2008
    Just wondering if you are going to continue with the story because it's good. Please do thanks.
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  • From YoukaiFate on June 29, 2008
    I think that was the hottest make-out finger-riding scene I have ever read. Hot fart. DAMN. Kurama and Sango are hot.
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  • From akiyome on November 13, 2007
    I was wondering are kurama and sango getting back together and are hiei and kagome going to get back together, ohther than that I loved this story. Just a suggestion can you write a kingom hearts story whith these character parings: Riku and Akiyome, Sora and Kairi, Roxas and Nominae,Akiko and Axel, Cloud and Sango if you could I would be so thankful because I have never seen a story on here with kingdom hearts characters in it. Thnx and this story is the bomb digity........(people slowly creep away)Hey where are you all going all I said was bomb digity.......(millions of people run screaming)AH SHE GOING TO KILL US WITH THE BOMB DIGITY RRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNN FOR YOUR LIVESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From rowdygirl on October 19, 2007
    really good story, i am totally intrigued with the characters, however, about clay: a potter can't take a piece directly from the wheel and put it in the kiln. it's a process. you throw your piece, a mug, say. let it dry for a day or two in a damp room or wrapped lightly in plastic. when it drys to leather-hard, you bring it back to the wheel and trim it; after which you would attach the handle. once again, you set it aside and let it dry until it is bone-dry. at that point you can put it in the kiln and fire it. the firing process requires that the full kiln be brought up to firing temperature [in our studio it is 2600 degrees F] and then the kiln shuts down and is allowed to cool off. the process takes approximately 24 hours, depending on the kiln and how full it is. the mug is now bisqueware and, after being cleaned, it is ready for the glaze. dip it, spray it, paint it, or all of the above, and let it dry then it can go back in the kiln for the final firing. it is actually a lot of fun.
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  • From ANON - sanchan on October 06, 2007
    I love this story please update it soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - T-CHan on September 25, 2007
    OMG!!!! lol i love this fic! man Kurama, Hiei and Naraku are being such asses!!! i mean lol it's like grow a pair and just be with her already lol, tho i do like Yusuke and Kagome being together better ^_^ god there just so hot ya know? lol well I do hope that you update soon and it would be interesting to see the fathers further interacting with there kids too ^_^ well i love this fic once again lol and hope you update soon ^_^ JA!
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  • From ANON - kira on September 04, 2007
    Please up date soon i lovethis story ive been reading it from the begining
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  • From ANON - KAREN on August 30, 2007
    HEY I WOULD LIKE 2 KNOW WHEN ARE U UPDATING THIS FICTION. I BEEN WAITING AND DYING 2 KNOW WHAT WILL BE THE UPCOME OF THIS FICTION.
    BYE AND I HOPE U UPDATED SOON

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  • From ANON - emmy on August 20, 2007
    please please please update this is one of my favorite stories.
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  • From hieikag on August 18, 2007
    update please
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  • From Silent Pluto on July 24, 2007
    rofl!
    That beach chapter was hillarious!
    I can't stop laughing, that was brilliant,
    I can just bet Kurama's kids are going to
    have a field day making Naraku's life hell.
    lol I can't wait! ^_^
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  • From madmiko on July 19, 2007
    What a nice, long chapter! You know, I have to ask: is the sequel supposed to be the same pairings as the original? I had been going on that assumption, but ... I mean, I didn't expect them to all reunite right away or anything, and I HAVE been jokingly (well, HALF-jokingly) urging you to bring in some decent men for the girls, but with Touya and now Kaname on the scene, and Naraku and Kurama still being completely unlikeable, I AM wondering if you still plan to redeem them and bring them all back together. And Hiei and Kagome, too, -- even if it IS with Yusuke along.

    Questions/Comments: Did Kagome ever take off her shirt and shorts and show off that white bikini? Because Shishi was staring at her boobs, but no one mentioned the scar. Is it shaped like a little hand? And I hated her ridiculous vanity -- who goes to the beach and doesn't get in the ocean becasuse of their HAIR? And disappoints their little girl because of it? Now THAT'S shallow. I loved Yusuke's thoughts and feelings about hiei getting to know his daughter. Wow! He has relly matured SO much more than the others. I guess fatherhood does that to you. Kagome's greeting left me with really mixed feelings. Was she trying to rub her relationship with yusuke in Hiei's face? That's really petty. On the other hand, I liked that she made Yusuke feel a little more secure about their relationship by not pretending there was nothing going on. So, ... huh. Kurama and his sons. He still hasn't told Shizuru? Why? Does he think he can keep that from her? I can't BELIEVE the two of them are getting married -- they have the freakiest, STUPIDEST relationship ever. Come on, Shiz! You're better than that! Don't settle for so much less than any woman should have to. Her thoughts that he was just a man who couldn't be faithful to one woman are just so much CRAP. He just needs a woman strong enough to MAKE him be faithful. (And of course, that added incentive of "true love," right?) His thoughts about his own sons were really kind of ... sickening. I'm glad Shippou told him that Sango had covered for him with them. Man, he needs to grow up and start taking responsibility for his own actions, instead of putting the blame on everyone else. What a whiner. It's no wonder all of his relationships have just been "flings," (except for Sango and Shiz), -- no real woman would put up with him once they got to know him, no matter how pretty he is and how big his dick is. Heh heh! I can NOT believe Naraku was such an ass! What gall to approach Botan in the water like that. And then his comments during the game, and HITTING her with the ball! WTF?!!? One of those other guys needed to step up and deck him one. Thank goodness Kagome slammed him back after what he said about Botan, but he really should have had to eat sand. And poor Botan! How sad that she feels like all of her relationships were just because of her money. Ouch! That's really got to give a girl a SERIOUS complex. Kaname was an interesting choice to bring in for her. And even Sango had problems there, with not just Kurama to deal with, but JIN, too. I can't believe he practically tackled her to the ground. He couldn't seriously have thought she would give him any. LOL!!Which brings me around to my favorite pair and what was going on with them. I loved it that Hiei went right in and started interacting with his daughter. And his pride in her ability to stay afloat was adorable! It's looking like he's the only one besides Yusuke with any sense. But we still need to see him admit he really had feelings for Kagome back in high school, and that he still does. Then he and Yusuke and Kagome will have enough to deal with trying to figure out how that threesome will work. Heh heh! But him smacking the ball away before it hit Kagome in the face was a good start. He cares. I'll end by mentioning just how much I enjoyed KURAMA getting knocked to the ground by the ball in the face because he was ogling Kagome helping Sango get the sand out of her top. HA!!
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  • From ANON - White Kitsune Shiva on July 18, 2007
    lovely! kurama getting smacked in the face, beautiful. when is him and sango goin to get back together though? isit goin to be threesome between hiei/kagome/yusuke? is botan goin get wit that hot dude with the blue hair?
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  • From Ellen on July 17, 2007
    Thanks for the updates I'm loving it

    The eating beans and feeding them to the kitten had me laughing so hard I had to read parts of it to my son, who asked "Whats so funny?" he got a kick out of it too without even having to relate it to the story.

    Lots of possible directions, looking forward to seeing where you take them. Thanks again for sharing. I look forward to reading S'more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2007
    love your story!!! im really hoping that one of the kids gets overprotective and shows the guys just how their powers help their mothers.
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