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Reviews for Torn In Two

By : LadyMinamino
  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2007
    this is great update asap

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  • From Shanalir on June 07, 2007
    Really great progression here. Can't wait to see how everything works out.

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  • From LadyShinomori on June 07, 2007
    Very cute, but I don't see Yomi keeping his six ears out of anything. I'm sure he is listening to every damn word being uttered. He's a man so he's going to be nosey. I just hope that if you make it a threesome that Yomi takes the front and Kurama takes the back in, cause if not, not even the jewel will repair the poor damage to Keiko's pucker. And I see a fight tween Yusuke and Hiei soon, both of them strike me as the jealous type when it comes down to a woman. They might try to control it at first but they are males regardless. All thinking is done south. Keep up the good work!
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on May 26, 2007
    great chapter. i really hope kagome ends up with hiei. the little hottie needs someone.
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  • From ANON - white kitsune shiva on May 25, 2007
    what about KURAMA!?
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  • From ANON - Shanalir on May 25, 2007
    I love the way this is progressing. Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Lillian9 on May 25, 2007
    I like your story.
    Yusuke/Kagome/Hiei isnīt my idea of a pairing because Iīm one of the very, very few that doesnīt like Hiei paired up with anyone (please donīt kill me for that, but I donīt think a 4ī10īī-guy can be very sexy and secondly I donīt like short hair, I know, I know, appearance isnīt everything, I just donīt think he is any sexier than Kuwabara, itīs only MY opinion, no offense).
    But I think Yomi/Keiko/Kurama(I assume) makes up for it a thousand times. Thank you. I love Yomi and he is either evil or gay in almost every fic I read about him. Why would he NOT fit together with Keiko? I love this pairing. As for Keiko... I donīt know why so many readers donīt like her. Except for the miko powers Kagome and her are very similar, I think... So Keiko gets all the hot guys this time ;-) Why not?
    Please just donīt turn any of the girls demon!!!
    Please update soon!
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  • From bluemoon1755 on May 24, 2007
    Keep up the good job, you should try and make a kagome/yomi story just to see how it'll go.
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  • From cowgirlkitten2000 on May 24, 2007
    interesting story so far. im looking forward to reading more of it
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  • From ANON - Selese on May 21, 2007
    I love the story, I think that the concept for it is fanastic. I especially love how Kagome and Keiko are a little out of their characters, but fot how I think that they would normally progress should these events have really taken place in the story line because of their human natures. Keep up the great work and update as much as you can, I can't get enough. Let us know whether or not Kagome's going to get Hiei, Yusuke, or both.

    Best Wishes,
    Selese
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  • From madmiko on May 20, 2007
    Interesting, but how old are they? The girls are acting like a couple of 12-year-olds. I can't believe they just let Yomi send them to their rooms while he and "the gentlemen" discussed the mission. It has as much to do with them, if not MORE, than with the guys. I kind of like it that Kagome isn't dealing with Inuyasha's death yet -- it's going to hit her hard when she does. Are you thinking of throwing Kurama in with Keiko and Yomi? That might be cool. You could do two threesomes. I loved the hot kiss between Hiei and Kagome. And it was nice that even though he kind of blew her mind with it, she didn't let it show and still walloped him. I really like him going after her so aggressively. There's lots of potential in this one -- I'll look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on May 20, 2007
    Oh my, this is shaping up to be an amusing story lol I see things getting very interesting between Yusuke and Hiei if they're both chasing after the same girl. Kags and Keiko are shocking the hell out of me, the amount of chaos those two are going to cause is going to drive Yomi nuts. Couldn't happen to a nicer guy though, I like it. Can't wait to see just what you have planned.
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  • From ANON - VixenOfTheFlame on May 17, 2007
    KURAMA/YUSUKE/HIEI/KAGOME PAIRING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    OR
    KURAMA/YUSUKE
    OR
    KURAMA/KAGOME
    OR
    YUSUKE/KAGOME
    OR
    HIEI/KAGOME
    OR
    HIEI/KURAMA
    OR
    YUSUKE/HIEI

    PAIRING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - white kitsune shiva on May 17, 2007
    love it so...beyond words at this moment...Im really into this. I'll be FAITHFULLY here WAITING for the NEXT update. hope its SOON.
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  • From ANON - VB on May 16, 2007
    AHHHH Keiko's joining forces with Yomi to take over the makai and Kurama's gay!!!! *continues reading* Damn well at least Kurama's still gay :P. Loving it update soon
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