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Reviews for Brothers-in-Arms

By : GingerBits
  • From drcomalfy on May 11, 2008
    lmao, I love that "shoulder nudging" XD And Sesshomaru being all smug at the end... great! I can't wait to see other types of "physical alliance" Inuyasha shares with him! Please update as soon as you can. Your characterization of the guys is on par, and the humor is entertaining! Great job!


    -DM
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  • From ANON - Merely Truth on May 11, 2008
    Waow ! they are so CUTE !!! And why ? Because you're showing them with a great subtility. Your characters are beautiful, like I love them...
    Thank you very much for your story !

    From a mommy, french reader,

    Bonjour de la France !

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - darksinistra on May 11, 2008
    wonderful!! I'm so glad you updated. You are very writing amazes me, and the way you describe scenes and interactions. They are so well thought of. Love your story. Please continue!!
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  • From theonlytalonsage on May 10, 2008
    Hn.

    I like this. I like it ALOT. I just sat and read it from start to current chapter finish, and it's wonderful. It's believable. It's raw and polished at the same time. The brothers are in character, which is so hard to find reliably. I am big on dog signals...I use dominance and submission and pack order in quite alot of my fics, so to see it elsewhere and so well done is a treat I relish.

    Pray...continue.

    *wag*
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  • From Sabriel20 on May 10, 2008
    Update soon please, I really love this story, the progression of the characters is natural and realistic.
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  • From LadyVorlana on May 04, 2008
    Please write more. This story has me intrigued and I hope to see more of it soon. Thankies!
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  • From midnightsweet on May 04, 2008
    up-date soon. would like to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Shedding Ink on May 03, 2008
    Thank God! I thought you had given up on the story.

    The chapter is short.. but I'll totally put up with short chapters and shorter time between updates if that's possible.

    I love your story and and thank you for updating.
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  • From princessgolux on February 13, 2008
    Wow. This is fantastic. You've got some of the most in-character writing of this pairing I've ever seen. The problems are realistic and the solutions complex and well thought out. And thank god! A story where InuYasha isn't being beaten by Sesshomaru! I love the fact that they're both having to see beneath the outward appearances they've always shown each other. And I love that you show so much respect for InuYasha's relationship with Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship with Rin. I thought that the description of Rin's death was beautifully bittersweet. I can't wait to see where you take this. Bravo!
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  • From mamarita on February 09, 2008
    His "touch" huh? That leaves a lot to the imagination. InuYasha is very slowly coming around to what he needs to do and that's good. Wonderfully written. I can't wait for the update. DLS
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  • From drcomalfy on February 08, 2008
    *squeeeee!* I love the part about Rin, and how Sesshomaru planned on taking her as his mate and how he'd fight every enemy just to have her... and the fact that you did this within a inusesst story... that's guts and great writing right there! I also loved how Sesshomaru's last word to Inuyasha about the next phase was "My touch." XD Oo and how Sesshomaru didn't even notice as the sunset came and went *squee!* Slowly he will find his heart again! Yay!

    GREAT job! I look forward to the next installment anxiously!


    -DM
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  • From KiaraNxiar on February 08, 2008
    A classic and original story with an original and intriguing plot. Awesome and in depth characterization to capture readers and leave them wanting for more. Wonderful writing and waiting for the next update eagerly.
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  • From midnightsweet on February 08, 2008
    sessy touch i will do it if inu don't want too. it will fun to see him try.
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  • From nchsmi on February 07, 2008
    I was hoping you'd come back soon! Nice one, don't wait so long next time, I thought you got bored and abandoned us! B reading U- L8r!
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  • From acr1228 on February 07, 2008
    Good chapter. Though, why didn't Sesshomaru bring Rin back with Tenseiga? I can think of a couple of reasons a) He had already done it once, and you can only give 1 "get out of death free" card or b) she died of natural causes. But it would be good to specify.

    I think you're doing a good job keep IY and S in character.
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