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By : Vyper

From wolfluv on January 19, 2008

I SWEAR I READ THIS CHAPTER BUT AFTER REVIEWING I RE-READ IT AND FOUND YOU GAVE ME HOPE!!!!

"I DOUBT THAT SESS" WHEN SESS TELLS JACKIE SHE CAN'T STEAL INU FROM HIM YEAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! HAPPY DANCE HAPPY DANCE!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!

just had to throw that in... hehe hee!!
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From wolfluv on January 19, 2008
mmmmmmmmm k.... Love Hot Topic stores! I personally have two cats who's names are Yin and Yang lite girl dark boy brother and sister my son named them no less.

Any ways... Love their out fits that's great but Jackie acts a little too butch? Or maybe pushy? I get the feeling you're still trying to hook Inu and Jackie up... She's more of a true bestfriend that is really how you made her out to be at least to me.

Love the fact Sess isn't ready to share yet!!! Also the fact he keeps trying to remind himself that it is Inu's night. Also the way Inu treats Jackie she's like his kid sister and I like that part of it too!

I was sort of surprize that Sess didnt' throw Inu over his shoulder in stead of Megan but it was a sight to imagine non the less! I love Kouga and Inu storys just like I love Sess and Inu storys.

I enjoy your storys because they are truly unique because you've incorperated the whole fam damnly! hehe hee....

But I truly hope Inu finds some one else besides Jackie as a female soulmate! Yeah shes loud shes out there and wild n all but that's what you choose for a best friend but again this is just my opinion. I know I know it sounds like I can't stand the girl but I just have trouble seeing her as anything else.

I look forward to your next update! I'd really like to see Sess and Inu do some erotic dancing on the floor though.... I mean who wouldn't??? I'm sure that you might have Megan and Jackie doing the same too... Or maybe Kouga and Inu just to get under Sess's skin a little bit ne?
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From wolfluv on January 19, 2008
SO YOU'RE KINDA WORKING WITH ME.... BUT I'm just not seeing Jackie as Inu's Soulmate here I mean Sess was next to himself over Megan and it looks like Jackies more interested in Megan then INU ANY DAMN DAY! WHY CAN'T INU GET SOMEONE FALLING ALL OVER HIM???

And if you dress Jackie all up for this clubing thing and make INU fall in love with her that will be JUST SO WRONG ESPECIALLY WITH JACKIES FIRST WORDS BEING WHO'S THE GIRL WITH YOUR BROTHER??? EYE'S POPING OUT OF HER HEAD OVER MEGAN ONCE AGAIN!

I JUST DON'T THINK IT WOULD BE FAIR TO INU BECAUSE OF THAT WHOLE SCENE RIGHT THERE! Although I am however digging on the fact that INU feels like he will be hanging out with his BESTFRIENDS NOT ALL THREE OF HIS SOULMATES!!! I feel SESS really needs a swift kick in the ASS concerning INU he was there first and he killed him to keep him as his SOULMATE!

AH BUT I did get the feeling that SESS was a little jealous of Jackie for Inu maybe but more for MEGAN once again... I also think it's great that INU has a BEST FRIEND like Jackie that understands his relationship with the ocean I understand why she is a wolf though the whole moon and tide deal but I think INU needs to have someone other then a dog/wolf I mean come on Sess has got a Cat for his sake...

BUT I REALLY DO THANK YOU FOR MAYBE USING SOME OF WHAT I REVIEW TO YOU EVEN IF YOU DON'T I STILL LOVE THIS STORY THAT HAS NOT CHANGED AT ALL AND THANK YOU FOR UPDATING SO QUICKLY!!! YOU ROCK OUT LOUD!!!!
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From wolfluv on January 18, 2008
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!! I am just a little disappointed that Sess and Inu are not true SOULMATES!!! I believe they are though! I just think Megan and Sess are being selfish brats! I miss the way the brothers were in the begining! I don't think it's fair Megan came inbetween them like she has. I just hope Inu gets a female soulmate that reminds Sess who his true soulmate is!

I'd love to see Inu with a native american woman! They are hard to find nowa days! Maybe have her be a bear demon??? Although I still think he should get a dragon demon soulmate! That would really piss Sess off! I'm tired of Megan being the main attention I hardly ever see Inu getting any as of late! Well that is until this chapter!

Maybe have some serious angst at the club where Sess and Megan really ignor Inu to the point he leaves without telling them since Megan took off and Sess left to find her without Inu leaving him abandond and alone for quite a while. Maybe even have Inu over hear Sess and Megan talking about how maybe Inu isn't there soulmate anymore...

Because Sess and Megan are fighting because Megan wants more of Sess to herself because she's feeling trapped even more now... Then changes her mind and Inu doesn't get to hear that part and have Sess maybe agree because he want's to make Megan happy??? While deep inside this is tearing Sess apart?

Have Inu go on a soul searching quest? Maybe he ends up on a reservation? Sorry I didn't mean to get carried away!

GREAT STORY ANY WAYS!!!!

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From wolfluv on January 15, 2008
WOW!!! I almost didn't read this story because of the title but I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

Question though will Inu meet his soulmate??? I mean in the story you said Inu put a spell on himself as well as Sess to find their female mates and Megan isn't totally into Inu. I think it would be cool if Inu found a dragon mate!!! I think then Megan might have some competition! To me that might put her in her place a little....

I think if Inu ran away because Megan didn't love him as much as he does her and finds his female soulmate that would really make the story better in my opinion. But you are the writer and I love the way your mind thought this whole story up! You should get an award for the uniqueness of this story but once again that is just my opinion. I can't wait to see what happens next! This is like a soap opera you have made me laugh and cry just reading this story! I am sure I am not the only one either!

Great Job!!!!! till next time...
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From mamarita on August 03, 2007
Through chapter 58, and it's getting better and better. I hate the idea of Sesshomaru handing over the kingdom to Jimmy.. But then again, I so love Sesshomaru!!! This is a wonderful story, please write more!
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From mamarita on July 31, 2007
Missed being here... long time since I reviewed and now 54 chapters.... Love this saga!!! What more can I say!
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From Vyper on July 30, 2007
I had a huge review I left on here to describe Megan, but took it off since it seemed to take up a lot of space. Described though so I think you will be aware this is a manily male male kind of story. Megan is someone for the boys to play with. Two guys having sex with one woman at the same time can rub against each other inside of her so it is still king of mainly them doing each other. Sure she does have sex one on one, but I think they would do that as mates.
I did not ever believe Demons were purely gay. I believe they like other creatures of mystery would be curious about all types of pleasure and would not hesitate to try most of them if not all of them. Still I am not going to get too disgusting like making children out of my ear or some crap like Naraku would do. Anyway read on, have fun and please review! I take them all! Whatever you say ya know you have an opinion so lets open up and express those feelings. Not repress! No repress! Uhhhhhhhhhh sorry was having one of those mushy touchy feeling disgusting moments there. Back to work on this monster! Come on Sesshoumaru lets get to work baby! Inspire me! Get naked........ cool....... Sesshoumaru is great inspiration especially when he is naked.
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From mamarita on July 19, 2007
OMG!! Chapter36.. this is great. I love this story more and more! Sesshomaru delivering InuYasha's babies? that is a trip! Can't wait to read more, but have a great vacation!
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From mamarita on July 17, 2007
one, two, three/three... interesting... all those babies at one time...I love this story more than you could ever imagine!
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From mamarita on July 17, 2007
Through chapter 30, it reads so quickly! I love it, the action, romance, the pace is great. I got a little slowed down with the history of Alistar, but it makes sense. And InuYasha is pregnant again! WooT!
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From mamarita on July 15, 2007
Just finished chapter 25. Hot, sexy and very well written. Can't wait to see what happens on the yacht!
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From mamarita on July 13, 2007
Just finished chapter 20 and it is amazing. I am so glad you figured a way of not making Sesshomaru out to be just a cold blooded murderer! Sexy is putting it mildly.
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From ANON - KitenKaiba on July 11, 2007
I LOVE THIS FIC its grate entertaining and fun story lined smut keep the update speed going its grate I don�t know why you have so few reviews I only have 2 problems with this fic

It is very jumpy as far as plot goes and leave a lot UN explained.

The talk scenes are a little long winded and slide in and out of character in places.

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From mamarita on July 08, 2007
OMG!!! What a turn! OK.. So, do we get more?
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