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Reviews for The Secret Kept

By : Glide
  • From ArchNemesis on July 08, 2007
    You're off to a great start; however, you should get a beta-reader. You're mixing up the tenses, which is a common mistake. Also, you might want to change Tetsusaiga's number of kills, you will definately nailed on that for the mere fact that it's mentioned in the third movie and one of the episodes as killing a 100 demons in one stroke not a million. And the same goes for Tenseiga, the sword the can save a 100 lives in one stroke. Remember, the swords are opposite of each other, the Tetsusaiga is from Inu no Taisho's left fang and Tenseiga is made from his right fang.

    But other than that, you're doing fine. Please continue.

    Nemesis ^_~
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  • From ANON - MEE on July 07, 2007
    It was well done. Continue ^^
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  • From Dragon7 on July 07, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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