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Reviews for Brother, Help me.

By : afromice

From ANON - sma_orlando on December 20, 2014
Please finish this good story.
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From ANON - Amber on August 30, 2013
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?
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From yaoifanboy4ever on November 13, 2007
that was good...more please X3
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From Jan on August 07, 2007
HOT!!!

Please update soon.

^__^
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From midnightsweet on August 04, 2007
looking forward too see what the sun brings with it when it rises.
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From Vyper on August 03, 2007
Very nice. Now we all just need some candy to suck on. Naked Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha together. Yummmmmm.......
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From drcomalfy on August 03, 2007
Mmm. (melts)

Okay well onto the review/critique.

I think your story could use some betaing/editing before posting, because some sentences just fall off at certain points, and others don't make sense at all (it causes the reader to stop and go 'huh?' which really affects the flow of the story). And! *cough* there should be more smut. *cough* XD Make it longer! Wahhh!

Good job!!

-DM
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From ladytokyo on August 03, 2007
Update soon please gotta know whats going to happen! Keh I said please!
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From Jan on August 03, 2007
You tease! Please update soon. I must have more smut! ^_~
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From Dragon7 on August 03, 2007
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I can�t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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From drcomalfy on August 03, 2007
OooOoo!! New Moon! Ahh!! (freaking tease!!) T_T Alas, the smut is JUST out of my REACH! TToTT Good job! ^_^

-DM
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From Vyper on August 02, 2007
Little writer you are being a tease. I might just have to bite you for this one.
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From midnightsweet on August 02, 2007
cool or should i say nice and hot... lol lol
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From drcomalfy on August 02, 2007
Freaking tease... (grumblegrumblegripegripe) XD Yay for another update!

-DM
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From midnightsweet on August 01, 2007
nice. there is all ways something too stop them.. dame
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