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Reviews for Slayers Romance

By : xXImikoXx
  • From evil on June 14, 2016
    Nice little one-short
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  • From ANON - ysiao on December 26, 2008
    love it!
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  • From ANON - ysiao on November 11, 2008
    Very, very intense! I wish you could write a sequel to this. Or another Sess and Sango. Written very well. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Hia on August 21, 2008
    I've already read this once before, but ... *Grin.* Still always gets me just a little revved.
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  • From TheGeneralEva on August 21, 2008
    Pay attention to if you use the a verb twice in the same sentence.

    If you wanted to seem more poetic, which some people do, then try not to use words like "them" or "her" a lot in one paragraph or sentence;
    "He remained constantly inside of -her-, with his hips still jerking upwards into -her-."

    Thats all. 8D
    /Karin/
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  • From ANON - Ruki-kikyou on August 21, 2008
    Adored it. Absolutely adored it. Being the English Nazi, I noticed a few errors, but that's about it. You portray both characters very well and the scene just fits. I can't wait to hear more. =D
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  • From ANON - Aruite. Kagome. on August 20, 2008
    Yes. Well. xD This is... very... Wow. There were a few typographical errors, but nothing too horrible. Lovely fanfiction, though. I'm not particularly a fan of the SangoxSesshoumaru ship, but this impressed me. Could be because I was linked directly to it. xD But yes. Amazing fanfiction. Do create more~. -Aruite.
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  • From ANON - Kagome on August 19, 2008
    I loved it! Especially because it is an odd pairing. I think your writing is great and keep me up to date when you do another story.
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  • From ANON - Delectably Perverse on March 08, 2008
    Eyah! A great twist between two characters I could actually see coming together. Wonderful description and mouthwatering sex. Better write more eh? Maybe start from the beginning of when they met ne? I look forward to seeing more
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  • From ANON - K on January 16, 2008
    First of all, I'd like to say that has to be one of the best one-shot scenes I have read in a long while. The detail was just enough so that my mind could see it clearly, and yet I wasn't bogged down by all the extra words.

    Secondly, I believe you captured both Sesshoumaru's and Sango's personalities flawlessly. Sesshoumaru, I knew, you'd have no problem with anyway, but just being able to make Sango enough like the actual Sango was enough to impress me.

    [And I do agree with your statement that Sango is inwardly wanting someone to dominate her and to give her the supportive figure to "lean on", thus lightening the weight of her always having to be the strong one.]

    Besides that, there's not much else I can say besides bravo.

    That and...

    You better let me read your other fanfics if and when you write another.


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  • From ANON - Tamara on January 07, 2008
    You said you wanted my honest opinion, no? Well, you're getting it anyway. The story itself..the plot, and such..was all right. I can see how the plot would flow. Yet..you may be able to get the paragraphs and ideas to flow if you stop trying to just fill the area. Sometimes, love, when you put little..you put a lot. For instance..when the dominant was un-dressing the submissive you could have done it in a less revealing manner that expressed a poetic/animalistic sense to give that..certain delicous taste before what came next. Understand? You have to tease your reader's to a point of them being on the edge of their seat and whining for him to just..drive his pulsating cock deep inside of her, hot, tight waiting inner walls. Give in to the desire, and you'll claim the cause. I did enjoy it, though. Just some honest tips.
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  • From ANON - NaNa on December 07, 2007
    Very well written.

    I'm impressed.

    This must be the first story I've read with such a pairing, but you managed to capture their personalities with one another perfectly.

    I'm interested in reading more of your work~

    --NaNa
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  • From Areitus on October 11, 2007
    I used to not care the pairing until I read a few good fics. Now I find the pairing intriguing, and it was very well written and descriptive for a pwp. And wow that was sum hot sex right thurrr. I like the whole demon slayer with a demon lord thing. Thanks for the awesome read!
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  • From ANON - Kagura on October 04, 2007
    Very smexeh. ^-^ Still, Sango is ew.
    I think shes alittle annoying...never liked her.
    Anyway, very nice, I didn't know he liked getting head..
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  • From ANON - xFireDevilCrystalx on October 04, 2007
    ... Wow. I love it! Keep up the great work, seriously! =^.^= I enjoyed reading this story, so, a great favourite from me! You should write more to this pairing.
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