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Reviews for Idiosyncratic

By : Stellykazz
  • From sparkysrath on July 20, 2008
    No one owns my soul. a friend of mine says it's not worth a baloney sandwhich, do you know if that true? Anyway I hope that you continue to write!
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  • From madmiko on August 22, 2007
    Okaaaaay. That second chapter was ... interesting. I loved the part with Yusuke and Souta. I'm not so thrilled with Aevrik. And where was my girl Kagome? LOL!! There's a helluva lot of stuff going on in this, I can already tell. I really, really love the way you're writing Souta. He's a typical teenage boy. The prat fall down the stairs was hilarious! But, Yusuke took Souta across into the Makai? And the gal he went to visit has a dog demon they call the Gardener? (Inu in modern times, perhaps? Tagging at the train station?) And there's something going on between her and Yusuke, but they can't admit it to themselves? And Yusuke is about to propose to Keiko? I'll be honest, I might have found Aevrik to be a fun, quirky character,(and I was intrigued with the possiblity of her being a spoiler for Yusuke/Keiko), -- if my boy Hiei wasn't following her, intrigued, and snickering at her nasty jokes. She can detect him and he can't find out a thing about her. And I utterly hate the idea of a pairing in that direction. I read other stories besides Hiei/Kag fics, but if he's not with her, then I prefer to see him go without. LOL!! The Nowhere Man running across Inuyasha was interesting. Is this the same "Nowhere Man" from the manga? Because wasn't that a youkai without a face? (He was similar to the "Un-Mother.") And you sure know how to bring on the angst right off the bat. What is our poor, slow dog-boy going to do? Granted, -- he brought it on himself, and took Kagome for granted far too long, but it was still heartbreaking. And I imagine Kagome was in a similar state on the other side of the well. Looking forward to seeing how this shapes up from here, but with a bit of trepidation now. Lovely job of writing!
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  • From kimmy919 on August 22, 2007
    Heheh, this is getting interesting! Thanks for fixing the paragraph spacings! Please keep it up! Ja ne!!
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  • From PhoenixWolf on August 22, 2007
    *snickers* So, what is going to happen to them? *taps chin in thought* Don't know, but I can't wait to find out more!

    Update again soon, please.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From swasdiva on August 20, 2007
    Great start. Your writing has a uniquely clever voice. I especially enjoyed the old men playing chess interludes... very much like the two old guys on the Muppet Show, if you even know what I'm talking about! The realizations between Inuyasha and Kagome, even though unvoiced, were tender and emotive...I could feel his sadness at his failure to make a decision in time as well as her sadness that her feelings had changed. Very true to life, that scene. I'm eager to read more of this, especially with such hilarious Yusuke interaction! And who, praytell, was possibly behind her when the motorcycle coughed up its own miasma? Dunno, but I'd like to assume it's another potential love interest!! Well, I'll see, won't I?
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  • From PhoenixWolf on August 17, 2007
    I like the title ... idiosyncrasy: n. peculiarity, as of behaviour; idiosycratic, adj.

    I can't wait for the reast of your story. You have a firm base, maybe a few more details to be added as we go along. I found it helps to double space when moving from one paragraph to the next. I also can't wait to discover the pairings, this will be a great story!

    Keep up the great work, I really hope to see another chapter. I will be recomending your story to others.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From kimmy919 on August 16, 2007
    First fic eh? Well, lemme at least congradulate you for at least having the guts to put up a fic ^_^
    (Unlike me... It's been a year and I still haven't posted a single story, not even a one shot, woe is me *wink*)

    First chapter is good, but ya might wanna separate the paragraphs more clearly, so the story will be more organized, other than that, you're good ^_^

    Keep it up, ok? I can't wait to find out who she's gonna be paired with! (I hope it's either kura, youko, kuro, or hiei ^_^) If you need help, I'm just an email away! Bye!!
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  • From madmiko on August 16, 2007
    Wonderful beginning! I loved the whole bit with Kagome watching Souta and Yusuke with the motorcycle. It seemed so REAL, -- just the kind of thing cousins might do. And I love the way you are writing this. Your style is lovely and flowing, and the descriptions are great. And the whole part about her friendship with Inuyasha, and him FINALLY, after 3 years making a choice, was SO GOOD! It was beautifully written and showed so well in his actions, and it was so poignant, that it made me sad. (Even though I have every hope that the unseen person choking from motorcycle fumes was none other than my favorite little fire youkai!) The juxtaposion of Inuyasha's thoughts that so much had happened in three years, and that three years was enough time to fall in love with your best friend, -- or OUT of love with your best friend, was simply brilliant. I can't wait for your next chapter!!
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