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Reviews for Mending

By : christabel
  • From Divanora on October 23, 2010
    I really hope you continue/finish this fic. It's a lot different than the normal Inuyasha mpregs, and I've enjoyed what you have so far. I really want to see Inuyasha's reaction to what he's done to Kouga once he's back in control of himself.
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  • From Verakum on May 26, 2008
    Good Story keep it :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 04, 2008
    i'm glad that you posted another chapter to this story. it was a very action packed chapter, too. there was so much going on, that sometimes it was hard to keep straight.

    i get the feeling that when you refered to kagome going to see kouga in chapter one, that she found out what had happened. this was never made clear enough to the reader. and kagome's being distracted enough about he thoughts on this matter being the leading cause of her being susceptible to the attack that killed her was never brought to light. they would explain inuyasha's grief and guilt, and would be a worthy addition to the story.

    before miroku and inuyasha went to kagome's grave, it would have been an opportune time to have inuyasha display more of an emotional outburst, and confess all his fears to miroku.

    i think this chapter felt a little rushed, because the basis for the emotions wasn't covered. i think it should have been done in two, or even three chapters instead.

    but it was good, and i thank you for posting it.
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  • From SamDeanZackCody4 on April 27, 2008
    That was indeed interesting, i can't believe that Inuyasha took his anger out on Koga and raped him. This story is fill with so much drama and angst.. which i like :). I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next, this story has me on the edge out my seat. Please write more real soon, because i don't too much fancy cliffhangers. Oh and nice job on this chapter :).
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  • From SamDeanZackCody4 on October 31, 2007
    Hi there, how soon are you gonna write the next chapter? I sent u an email, so be to check it.
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  • From SamDeanZackCody4 on October 18, 2007
    I wonder what happened between Koga and Inuyasha...it was a shock to see that Koga had a baby for Inuyasha, and why did Inuyasha react the way he did when he found out that the baby in Koga's arms was his, i hope that Inuyasha will accept the baby, and be there for Koga & their baby daughter. Anyway great chapter, and i'm really anxious to read more of this story, so please write more soon, because i'm starting to like to story! :) :) :).
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  • From Kagenoshi on October 09, 2007
    Hey, I like this, you should continue it! Mpreg is like my anti-drug. I wanna know what had happened between Kouga and Inuyasha, how Kouga ended up pregnant and such! I hope to see a new chapter in the near future.
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