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Reviews for A Fun Time At Camp

By : HockeyFan26
  • From ANON - DR.Jinxers on June 30, 2008
    Write the next part Damnit!

    not to be rude or anything, but honestly, you write some of the goddamned BEST Yuri I've EVER read... A romp in the woods? Sounds good to me.
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  • From ANON - Stephanie Miranda on December 06, 2007
    Write the 3rd installment, please!! That was so deliciously good and I was hoping for them to last at least one or two more orgasms but that could be saved for the 3rd one, ne?

    Wow...imagine four orgasms in one chapter?? I'm such a perv. But maybe you could get creative and use some camping equipment as a temporary sex toy? Maybe like the end of a flashlight, or even just Kagome's dildo that she uses. Oh dang, that IS HAWT.

    Kagome/Sango is my favorite pairing. But mostly when Kagome is taking the dominant lead, 'cuz I think she deserves it after all the crap that Inuyasha & Naraku put her through. And honestly, Kagome is such a fiery/feisty person that it's hard to see her in submissive roles.

    So, please, please write the next chapter; A Romp in the Woods.
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  • From Daikoi on November 25, 2007
    I would love to read more, of this fic. Kudos to you and your beta reader for the good grammar and spelling.
    I can't wait to read the next installment!!!
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  • From Iyasu on November 21, 2007
    I didn't think that it was bland at all! I did think that it was sweet though, for a first time. I really enjoyed it, and I would like you to add the third part. Wonderful story.
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  • From HAP on November 02, 2007
    This proves it! I'm a failure (again!)
    People beat me to my revieeeew *emos in her corner*

    But I had a good excuse this time, I swear. Mid-terms, they steal my sanity and don't ever call again.
    So, here I am with my mega-late review like the terrible person I am.

    As always, I am in love with your writing. Really, you don't give yourself enough credit. You're really, truly a wonderful writer, and heaven knows this section needs more good writers like you. And this second chapter was just as wonderful as the first.

    I love the way you portray their relationship. It's so light and sweet, and innocent (despite the incredibly hot sex that ensues, of course.) It's a wonderful reprise from plotless sex. And on that note, I am in full favor of the third part, because, damn it, your plotless sex is so damn hot.

    So, yes. This is my intelligent review. XD;;
    (And I haven't received an email from you yet. Everything okay?)
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  • From EddieTheLightbringer on November 02, 2007
    My oh my, that certainly lived up to my expectations. ^_^

    I only have one nitpick: "continue to standstill." in this context it'd be two words, "stand still", not one word. Or you could replace "continue to" with "remain at" and still keep it one word. So yeah, there's my nitpick.

    If you want to write a third chapter to this, I'll be more than happy to read it. =)

    And I apologize to ThunderHeart, next person who steals HAP's spot gets an angry glare instead. ~_^
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  • From ANON - Charley on October 31, 2007
    I liked the ending ,it was realistic and heart warming ... altho some people don't read this for the heartwarming part. I'm in a relationship and it made the story more meaningful to me that it showed their love like that. It showed that just sex isn't enough for love and I really liked that. A sequel would be cool ,mabey one w/o sex and more plot ... or more sex and more plot >.> ya know ,whatever u feel like do'n.
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  • From HAP on October 20, 2007
    Geez, fourth review? What is this madness? I'm really losing my edge. =/

    But, anyways, as I said in the emails we exchanged, I'm really diggin' this new story. I love that you put the backstory into your stories instead of making it just plotless, mind-blowing sex (not that that's a bad thing, either, of course.) I like the thoughtfulness you put into the characters, and as always you make me jealous with your skills!

    So, I'm looking forward to your next chapter, sweetie. It promises to be most entertaining, I'm sure.
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  • From ThunderHeart on October 18, 2007
    *gasp* I did take HAP's spot! I'm so sorry!!! :( *gets down on knees* Please forgive me!
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  • From EddieTheLightbringer on October 15, 2007
    *sucker-punches ThunderHeart for stealing HAP's spot as first reviewer*

    My word that was a lot of emphasized words.... I'd be tempted to ask you to cut back a bit on them.

    It's always nice to see new Sango/Kagome fics popping up, especially by you who I view as one of the top two writers in this section (HAP being the other one). I also have you to thank for allowing me to enjoy the "present era" setting for these stories. ~_^

    Satisfactory use of Jakotsu for a reference. ^_^

    I like the backstory you're putting here, and if your last story is any indication, I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

    Mind-blowing sex scenes are good, mind-blowing sex scenes with equally engaging plot is better ^_^

    Keep up the good work =)
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  • From ThunderHeart on October 14, 2007
    Yay a new Kag/Sango story!!! Awesome start, I really liked it, it was very believable =]Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^__^
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