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Reviews for Inuyasha's Truth

By : ItaKagome
  • From ANON - sma_orlando on December 20, 2014
    Please finish this good story.
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  • From Auroawinter on April 01, 2012
    To be honest, I was really looking forward to reading this. I was a bit disappointed in the sentence structure,the over use of Dear brother/sister ( Really just the general overuse of Dear), and the constant switch of him/her when in refrence to Inuyasha. I found the story incredbly hard to read as most of the time I was trying to figure out what was actually meant. I think the story idea has potentional, I just think you may want to consider a beta to help.

    I only read up to chapter 4 before I pretty much gave up trying to read more. Good luck with your future writing

    Chrys
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 02, 2008
    I think you have a good idea, but I see some definite problems in the execution. First I'd say you should try to find a beta. Because you have a lot of errors scattered through the story that take away from it. Especially in this last chapter. It looked like one section repeated itself at least twice over. Also I'd watch the ooc in the characters. Things will be different since this is a canon story, but I wouldn't go too far. Main thing, watch the giggling. Sesshoumaru is not a giggler, no ifs, ands or buts about it. And lastly, I'd watch for inconsistencies in your storyline. You have a number of those also, things that maybe a beta could pick out for you. So I guess that's my main advice. Find a beta who can correct grammar, who can check your storyline, and who knows the seres and can pick out any little mistakes made.
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  • From shippo6906 on January 01, 2008
    very good chapter baby can't wait to read the next hope you update soon
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  • From nchsmi on December 31, 2007
    YES!!!!!! A new chapter, I love it! So, InuNoTashio and Izayoi have come back, for a little chat, huh? It was great! Update soon, B reading U!
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  • From mls on December 31, 2007
    I love this story!!!!!! I hope you post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From midnightsweet on December 31, 2007
    i didn't see that coming. so now what???
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  • From midnightsweet on November 21, 2007
    hope she feels better. looking forward to the next one.
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  • From laica on November 20, 2007
    great chapter like it update soon again
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  • From shippo6906 on November 20, 2007
    great chapter baby can't wait to read more
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  • From laica on November 05, 2007
    like it it has a certain cham to it
    laica
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  • From mamarita on November 03, 2007
    I liked the story- knew the battle was going to have the desired outcome... Only little criticism is the mushiness of the talk between Sesshomaru and InuYasha... it was so sweet I am going to have to see the dentist for a check up to be sure I don't have any new cavities. (hahahahahahahaha) Please write more, but remember who Sesshomaru is and what he would really be like, even if truly in love with InuYasha... A little less sugar from him would be more appropriate
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  • From shippo6906 on October 31, 2007
    ahhhhhh thank you baby love you i was glad to do it and very nice chapter by the way hehe hugs and kisses
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  • From midnightsweet on October 30, 2007
    that was a lot better than the last one. i got one having him sitting at the front of the boat think about iun and him doing the same thing. they both share a shiver or a little more. just a though.
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  • From mamarita on October 30, 2007
    Chapter 6 sets the tone for rest of the story, actually.. You know there is someone in China who could technically take over if InuYasha decides to leave- and there will be fight to get InuYasha back, but I think it would be nice if the Lord of the Eastern China lands helps InuYasha's cause! Just an opinion on how to take it.. Oh, and although I loved MY grandfather dearly- I hate this SOB that is InuYasha's... how dare he.............
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