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Reviews for The Perfect Patient

By : Thesmexyiceman
  • From Phoenix_x99 on February 25, 2018

    Is that the ending?


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  • From The-Succubus-Goddess on September 04, 2013
    Damn!!
    that is so fucking hot!!
    Can't wait for the next chapters!!
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  • From nekogirl1 on January 18, 2009
    Quite different, like the doctor idea
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  • From nekogirl1 on January 18, 2009
    Quite different, like the doctor idea
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  • From ValheruYaoi on February 08, 2008
    YAY, like where this is going. Now just gotta wait for the next chapter
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  • From WeIrDpErSoN on November 23, 2007
    The spacing isn't to bad. For tips why not look over other authors writing styles and incorporating them into your own. Maybe two short chapters could be made into one instead, it looks better to me, but that is just opinion. But so far good job, love the little scene ^_~. Hope to see more, and good luck with your writings!

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  • From Thesmexyiceman on November 22, 2007
    Alright so I am not really sure how to space it so it doesn't look bad any tips would be great
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