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Reviews for Pleasant Diversion

By : cynsue
  • From ANON - taixi on December 11, 2008
    I think this story is miscategorized. I spent the entire story waiting for/trying to figure out when the "dark" aspect of the fic would reveal itself. Turns out the story came to its conclusion but I still can't figure out what was dark about it. You may want to move the story into the "general" category (rather than "dark fic" category), and/or the Male/Female category.
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  • From ANON - ysiao on December 04, 2008
    That was a beautiful story! I loved every chapter of it! thank you for creating this ;)
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 30, 2007
    Sorry I just have to add that I am suprised that you didn't get more reviews! Your story was a pleasant diversion and it had a happy ending. It was great!
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  • From ANON - Bee on December 30, 2007
    That was the best story in the world. I loved it. Please write again soon. How about a sequel? I would love to see both their son and daughter grown up and falling in love!
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  • From ANON - Mary Sue or Self Insertion on December 16, 2007
    Plot? Character development?
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  • From ANON - amadoni on December 04, 2007
    I think you would have alot more reviews if you made the female character someone like Kagome or Rin.
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