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Reviews for Last Christmas

By : sammyx
  • From sparkysrath on July 20, 2008
    Ohayo! I like your story! umm just a few things that I noticed though.
    Koibito- is used by females for their males
    Anata- it the same thing as koibito

    Koishi- I believe is what you meant. Since it was Kurama calling Kagome Koibito, which should have been Koishi
    aisai- is also what should replace anata.

    just thought I'd help, I really do like your one shot though!
    Ja Ne
    Infinite Silence
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  • From KagomeMinamino on December 10, 2007
    what a great oneshot!!!! you should continue to do more oneshots like these ^_~ by the way, I really liked that last sentance hehe, it sure adds a touch to it
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2007
    I really like this, I've read it 3 times already. 1 thing though there seem to be missing words here & there starting in the 1st paragraph you have pre-lit Christmas & no tree after. Hope this helps & I'm looking forward to reading whatever you do next.
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  • From LadyE on December 09, 2007
    Great one-shot! I'm a real lover of Kagome/Kurama! It was well written too. Hoping to read from you again,and Merry Christmas!
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  • From madmiko on December 09, 2007
    Cute! The bra on the tree was a great touch!
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