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Reviews for Predator and Pray

By : theonlytalonsage
  • From ANON - paula on October 02, 2010
    O....M...G!!!!! that was hottest story i've read all day and i've been up since 6:00 AM!!!!!
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  • From Knittingknots on March 21, 2009
    This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

    Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

    Our official website can be found here:
    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/

    The current nominations pages are here:

    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction)
    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart)

    Check them out to see what you were nominated for!

    Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here:
    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/

    Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!


    ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots
    Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association

    ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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  • From Leeana69 on November 02, 2008
    I have to say, as much as I loved that story the part I loved the best was Inuyasha wondering when the last time he had a DUCK was. XDDD
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  • From Knittingknots on September 16, 2008
    This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association!

    Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashaloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom.

    Our official website can be found here:
    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/

    The current nominations pages are here:

    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction)
    http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart)

    Check them out to see what you were nominated for!

    Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here:
    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/

    Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group!


    ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots
    Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association

    ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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  • From pseudohanyou on June 25, 2008
    I read your other reviews. Fuck that, the POV was fine. The only way it could even possibly be confusing is if it was one person writing flat characters who mimic each other and this wasn't the case.

    Why is everything you write so fucking hot? (Rhetorical question, of course)

    The rawness of this was...breathtaking.
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  • From pontaloon on February 14, 2008
    definately kinky! the only problem is you switch point of views every paragraph and its a tad confusing in the begining. appart from that its a great read! i love hyper animalistic Inuyasha!!
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  • From ShouraiChan on January 18, 2008
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    ..............................*DIES* SO sexy!!!!! I loved it! Omigod! This story is the PERFECT combo of love and sex and raw lust...! I LOVE it when Inuyasha is the dominator! It's just so sexy and Miroku is just as sexy! I loved it, loved it, looooooved it! I especially liked the end, it made me tear up! BEAUTIFUL dedication! Keep up the great work!!!!

    ~Sho-Chan~
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  • From mamarita on January 10, 2008
    Very hot and so well written. Enough said!
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  • From szaugg on January 06, 2008
    Well....


    Um....

    *ahem* I seem to be unable to talk due to the total hotness of the writing. Pardon me while I fan myself and go off to write porn, now that I have been totally inspired.XD

    Woooooooo! You and Jenerik brand did an awesome job! I loved the sensual aspect, with all the senses combining so fluidly. That was wonderful.
    And I liked the alternating paragraph/POV style. Very interesting. The only thing that I didn't like about it was the first few times it took me a moment to figure out what was going on (the image of Miroku biting off the head of a squirrel is one that will not soon leave me, heh). And I honestly don't know how that could be any different without messing up what you have, so...just mentioning it in case it spurs any thoughts, eh?

    Overall, a wonderful, erotic Miroku and Inuyasha story that I got totally stoked over!
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  • From Danyealle on January 05, 2008
    While I loved the plot the POV switches made it VERY hard to follow and tell who what saying/doing what. Perhaps a signal that you are changing POV would help.
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