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Reviews for The Break In

By : sexydivine
  • From LadySesshomaru on February 16, 2011
    I'm laughing so hard right now it's not even funny.
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  • From PillowTalk on January 19, 2008
    Interesting. You really could've fleshed out the first chapter more with Inuyasha's profession and personality, as well as when he met Kagome, but you've still got a decent setup. Update soon, plz.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on January 14, 2008
    Well.. I like it when Inuyasha talks dirty as much as the next girl. Kinda hot actually-- I'm gonna have to be completely honest, there needs to be more detail and the plot should be a little more, oh whats the word, solid. You have a good idea, I think, it just needs some sorting out.


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  • From midnightsweet on January 14, 2008
    what a start.
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