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By : debEdoo
  • From on January 21, 2008
    Why did you kill Kagome? Oh well, it's not my story.

    So, I'm somewhat new to this site too, so don't feel bad about it. The only advice I can give is "Write what you think is right."

    Hey, I just got that pun.*laughs some* That's kinda funny.

    PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE THIS STORY! Some people start a story, then go for over a year without updating.

    I gotta go, later.
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  • From kookookitty on January 20, 2008
    nice start. i don't mind but don't be disappointed if others say anything about it being a bit tame for this site. your writing is eloquent, description and portrayal of his grief was done well.
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  • From LadyTsunadeSama on January 20, 2008
    Wow, that's an excellent start and-- I can't wait to see more. I love your style.
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  • From LadyCash on January 20, 2008
    Very nice start!
    Good characterization, a story with excellent potential!
    I eagerly await more.
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  • From freelke on January 20, 2008
    I enjoyed it alot. Hope you find the time to update very soon. Welcome to the site!
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  • From DannyGirl9999 on January 20, 2008
    I like chapter one. Please update soon. ;)
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