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Reviews for A Series Of Humiliating Events

By : Merkswinter
  • From SplendentGoddess on December 27, 2010
    I really liked it. I liked that you had Kaede as some kind of obscure, Sengoku jidai rum runner or some such nonsense. I liked how you got rid of Kagome without having to kill her off or anything overly dramatic. I liked that the whole thing between brothers started from a drunken confession. I absolutely loved your line about what 'little awkward moments' strived to be when they grew up, and I even liked that you quoted Pratchett. I didn't mind that you made Sesshoumaru waaaaaaaayyyyy OOC emotionally, since the whole concept of yaoi as a whole is blatantly OOC regardless, which pretty much means the rules can be tossed to the wind. I think my most favorite thing of all was the mention at the end that their relationship is actually equal, in that Inuyasha wanted to top next time, and he did indeed successfully get Sesshoumaru to bottom for him. It kind of bothers me when Inuyasha is ALWAYS the uke. Of course, I've read stories where Sesshoumaru is the uke instead, but then it's still one-sided. I like it best when they take turns. Fair is fair. All in all, WONDERFUL job. It was utterly silly, totally steamy, and thoroughly enjoyable.
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  • From mamarita on March 06, 2008
    I love this. The drunken confession, the almost fatal confrontation and then the smut! Loved it all.. Please write another story soon! DLS
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  • From Afrieal on March 05, 2008
    Ah yes it's never fun to do that... try writing a threesome scene when your family is running around the house after a funeral (stress relief in the extreme) and it's on your MOTHER'S computer there was a reason besides free minutes Rysh and I worked at three in the morning then. Thankefully Rysh and I writing on my mate's computer is not as much trouble as he likes yaoi and as Rysh is my blood-sib and little brother moved out that's the worse we have... good luck with future fics and thanks for the wonderful giggle
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  • From Onyxlight on March 05, 2008
    No this was very well done and the sex scene didn't seem rushed to me at all! (not that I'm any expert) I know how hard it can be to write with interuption and I think you did very well.

    and I am obsessed with the ... as well and I feel it can never be used too much *hugs*
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  • From Onyxlight on March 05, 2008
    try and start a fight, fall over miserably while attempting to draw sword, find self incapable of getting back up and burst into tears whilst mumbling incoherent love confessions to said horrified older sibling.


    Oh the above was great! That was the mother of all fanfiction lines *bows in awe* Great job and yes I am enjoying it immensely!
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  • From janas on March 04, 2008
    yay u finished a story...very impressive

    i understand ur pain, my little sister likes to walk into da room every now and then...a lock if very helpful sometimes ;)

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  • From sweetsatincocoa on March 04, 2008
    The sex scene made me...pulse. Nice. Also when Inuyasha thought about 'why do people do this' yeah, I've had that thought during sex too, but it didn't get better like it did for him. Hilarious. Good work.
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  • From midnightsweet on March 03, 2008
    not bad at all. it was very enjoyable.
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  • From pipdfunnybunny on February 20, 2008
    Ooh, very well done. (^^,) Still, the pervert in me is demanding the sex scene and wants it to happen *now.* Please update. (~.^)
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  • From on February 19, 2008
    Zomg, I've never even thought of this kind of plot before... It's awesome. I loves Inucest already, and this is a hot one! Ready for the update ^^
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  • From wolfluv on February 18, 2008
    SAUCY just the way we likes it!!!! I'm a little concerned though is Sess just gong to rip a piece off and leave our Inu heart broken and alone??? Is Sess going to make him work for it? Will he say some thing to the effect SHOW ME HOW MUCH LITTLE BROTHER???? OOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW I KNOW I KNOW I HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE BUT DAMN!!!!!

    I LOVE IT!!!!

    THANK YOU FOR UPDATING AND DON'T WORRY THEY SEEMED PRETTY IC IF YOU ASK ME!
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on February 17, 2008
    hahahahaha poor Inuyasha ! XD
    Want more ! I want Sesshy to "kill" him so much... lol
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  • From midnightsweet on February 17, 2008
    not bad for the morrning after. hope you recap last night in a chapter, it sounds like it was a lot of fun... lol lol tasty is always a good thing.
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  • From kogaluver on February 17, 2008
    This is really so very cute and funny. I haven't chuckled reading a fic in a long time. Nicey done. I'm anxious to see what Sessy does with his hard on, lol. ^_^
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 17, 2008
    lol. poor baby, he's gonna get it good. ^__^ looking foward to the next update.
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