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Reviews for Gift of the Blood

By : sugar0o
  • From Kagomelives on September 13, 2008
    lol hopefully if i keep reviewing thic story you will *hint,,hint* update it
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  • From Kagomelives on September 13, 2008
    well i do think it's a great start but I also believe that now you can take your time with htem. I think she wold be confused and though she may feel obilgated to be with him physically because of the mark ...and the way she had been reacting to his touches and allowing it without sternly putting her foot down about it she would not want to mate with him fully.

    So i think some wooing should happen. but i think that it should not just be Sess wooing her but her wooing him . Because after awhile I think he would stop asking and wait to see what she would do.

    anyway great start . hope you start this one back up b/c it has promise
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  • From Kagomelives on March 08, 2008
    i've found you again! hehe i like this story , Betrothal is still my fav but this does have promise . but i will say i think the later option would be more in character with how you have had kagome react. i think yes she would be shocked but she would understand the circumstance that led up to it however i think that Sess would have a hard tme not blaming himself plus i think kagome though she might be willing doesnt know how to love hi completely yet which he's going to want and that would cause some problems... have fun with it and take your time in the development of the story..we all know your chapters are worth the wait !!
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  • From oneswish on March 06, 2008
    so far this story is really wonderful.

    what happened to kagura and kaede?

    you should have sessh figure out some of kag's background in the library, or have a dream thing they share.. something like that.. umm.. they need a new enemy though cause its seems soo blah with out some bad guys, ya know? i think that her inu instincts should kick in and have her realize what happens and she must accept it, to some degree anyways.. need some angry kag's there, always makes a great fic when she makes her own choices.. im being vauge cause its ur fic and u need ideas to an extent, right?

    So good luck and have fun.
    higan
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  • From Fourshotchild on March 06, 2008
    Yay! A third chapter! I always
    get excited when I see your stories
    updated! Whoo! By the way, that
    was a great chapter. Even through
    the battle, it was quite romantic.
    Like always, I'll be checking up!
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  • From Fourshotchild on March 04, 2008
    Honestly, this is probably one of
    the best stories I've read in a long,
    long time. I can't wait to read the
    new chapters. I just want to keep
    readig more. This story is orignal
    and... gees, I don't even know what to
    say. Just wow. Truly.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2008
    Ok i didnt mean to be that quick. And that was a LONG LONG CHAPPIE. Anyway, i really like your twist on Kagome turning into a Full Demon, i seriously thought she would just turn into a half demon. Boy was i wrong. Ok I might have missed a bits in there but not to worry i offen rereead if i think i have.
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  • From lovelessjayson on February 28, 2008
    Maaaybeee.. Ok yeah soon enough thanks for the new chapter it is sad and thought provoking.
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  • From SesshieXplushie on February 28, 2008
    I really hope you take this somewhere new because I've read at least ten stories that start off exactly like this. Your writing is decent but I am definitely not impressed with the lack of originality in the plot-line so far. Please prove me wrong and make this a good one, I rather enjoyed some of your other work.
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  • From Lunar84 on February 28, 2008
    Really good so far. It's an interesting plot you have. Everything looks good. The story flowed very well. Some things were a little confusing, but I'm sure I can figure them out as the chapters progress. Please update when possible.
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  • From LoveIsAMovement on February 28, 2008
    Hey, you're off to a great start. I can't wait to see where you'll take it!!! If you need someone to bounce ideas off of you can e-mail me, I'd love to help! Anyway, wonderful job so far, continue!
    ~Vanessa (Loveisa_movement@yahoo.com)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 28, 2008
    WOW that was great, Ive read something like it b4. Anyway i hope you write more chappies matey. Anyway gotta Run
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  • From lovelessjayson on February 28, 2008
    great first chapter I hope you up date soon I would love to read more Thanks for posting it.
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