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Reviews for The Shadows of Time

By : ryukotsusei
  • From CoffeeGyrl on May 08, 2008
    I like it, I love it, I want more of it.

    Great job shaping up Tres character, he's human but you're still keeping him in tune I like the changes. Miroku is adorable and I love what you're doing with everyone. Pretty damn gritty with Inuyasha facing his failure, I hope this knocks some sense into him. I like the thing about Abel's life span being far reaching, you keep the science of the show flowing. And Abel's and Miroku's 'they're not real' lines were great and funny. I love, love, love your work darling I look forward to each and every update.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on May 07, 2008
    Wow, this chapter was something of a tear jerker in it's own way. You've done an excellent job dealing with the emotions of the moment and bringing them to life for me. LOL, but that's one of your talents as an excellent author I suppose. I wasn't sure who I felt more sorry for in this chapter. As much as InuYasha tends to be and is an arse when he actually saw what had happened in Kagome's time in the future I think that knowledge hit him hard. I know it has his Kagome hard as well, but as you said she'd had a lot of time to discuss it with Kagome where to him it was all brand new. I can't wait to see what else you have planned. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on May 07, 2008
    Wow, I'm glad that you decided to give Kagome another body, it's the only way that I could imagine them having any chance at all of beating Naraku. Having Midoriko show up and what she did with Tres was a surprise but a good one. LOL, for some reason I've always liked the ancient miko. And poor Shippo with his thoughts of never seeing Kagome again. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Update soon.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on May 01, 2008
    So sweet and smart I love what you're doing with this. I have one question is Esther the Queen of Abloina or just a nun? I love how you did Esther in this and her inner monolog on her personal views on killing, very nice. I adore Abel worring about Kagome's dress size, so freaking cute.

    I love Shippo's take on Tres being Miroku's reincarnation, that was very funny. I love the ceremony and the explination of it for the Goshinko.

    And this was a great freaking line 'Hold strong, Father Tres, God will see you through this trial and I pray that your pain will end quickly.'

    Highlighting Abels faith and concern is so freakng great, I love the religious parallels of east meets west with Abel and Kagome.

    You really surprised me with the story twist but I really like it and it give hope to the future changing and makes everyones death less sad.

    I love this a lot I'm eagerly awating the next instalment. Oh and Tres is hawt! You're so freaking smart to write this.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 25, 2008
    Awww this was such a sad chapter. Thank goodness you told how the vampires came about I never figured it out in the anime. I love how you've writen everyone and you're doing such a great job. This was very good and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

    I really do love your work darhling.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 17, 2008
    You're breaking my heart with losing both Kouga and my Shessy. But you really did a great job keeping everyone in stelar character. I can't guess were you're going with this and I love all the twists and turns. You're really moving the story at a break neck speed.
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  • From ANON - Starcrossed on April 17, 2008
    Hum...the plot thickens...^-^
    *emo tear* I'm sad Sesshy had to die, but I'm happy Shippo still lives (for now, not sure of that ending
    -_-).

    I'm just wondering what disease Seth and Abel are gripped with, I don't exactly remember Naraku having that ability besides the masma stuffs. Oh well, I really stopped paying attention to the show when school got so heckic.

    Anyways, good chapter! Can't wait till the next one!
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on April 16, 2008
    Well... I never thought I'd see the day that Sess would fall to the likes of Naraku but you've shown me how wrong I was. I wonder how many more are going to die before Naraku meets his end, assuming he does. "He does meet his end in this story doesn't he?" I also am left to wonder how many or who from the Vatican will die? Anyway good chapter, I can't wait for the next one :D
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 12, 2008
    Luving Tres, luving Abel. I like the Sister Kate thing having the jewel. Gawk you really make he hate Naraku, very good. A hero is only as strong as the villian. I'm really looking forward to the next instalment, I can't wait to see Kagome again.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 12, 2008
    How could I have missed this! I love, love, love the pairing you're giving me goosebumps. I adore Tres and look forward to what you're going to do with him.

    Man you are brutal, the whole buring of the witch/miko thing, the poping eyes ....

    I've missed you so much darhling:)
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  • From ANON - starcrossed on April 10, 2008
    *dances around before trips up, being the ungraceful woman she is* YESSHH! Another chapter out! I luvvesh it! I really liked how you've blended the two animes and I can't wait to see whats next!
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  • From ANON - Takhisiss (nsi) on April 10, 2008
    I am the first one to admit that my knowledge of TB is limited but from what I do know it seems to me that you've managed to keep them in character very well. Naraku needs to die, I hope that it won't take Tres and Abel (I assume it will be them?)long before they catch of with him or I shudder to think what havoc can and will be wrecked upon the world. I'm curious as to what the plan will be to catch him. Update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Starcrossed on April 04, 2008
    T-T What do you mean your only going to post it every two weeks!?! I can't live that long! -_- It's such a good story, please continue! I really like the two series you are mixing and your writing is amazing too!

    I can't wait till the next chapter! =^-^=
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  • From madmiko on April 03, 2008
    Wow! This just takes my breath away. I'm so excited to see this go up! ^_^ The beginning here is just so powerful and shocking and agonizing and SAD. The final battle followed by Kagome's decision to go home, only to have to watch the horror of her family's massacre and her own torture and death. It just tied my stomach up in knots. NO ONE writes those scenes like you do. The interactions of the whole group were so good and Naraku's evilness has never been so brutally plain before. This is such a tense, edge-of-your-seat, nail-biting thriller. I can't wait for the next chapter to go up!!!!
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  • From ANON - VB on April 03, 2008
    YOU'RE BACK!!! yeah yeah yeah yeah! ...yeaaahh I'm running off 3 hours of sleep in 72 hours and its 6 in the morning. I should be sleep but I had to rid this first. I love it already. Now you just have update your other fics and all will be right with the world.
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