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Reviews for Detachable Penis

By : 4arrows
  • From ANON - Steph on November 21, 2014
    Oh my god I love you
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  • From GreenMouse on May 31, 2008
    I really loved your story, it's a rare thing to see this paring in any form of a readable way. Though I have 2 concerns, one is at the bottom of the page on chapter 3, it seems like you'll be making more chapters, and the story so far contain enough content to do so without butchering it. Secondly what's with the Starbucks, Olive Garden, and Barns and Nobels, it appears as if that you've randomly placed elements for humour, that haven't been so well sewn into the story.
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  • From tgbrunner02 on May 31, 2008
    HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!
    basically, i'm not too sure if i can even finish this, i'm laughing so hard.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2008
    sorry but what a ridiculous fic this is! did you get inspired by the stupid movie "idle hands" or something? and what's up with the slang usage and other stuff from modern day? is this in the feudal times, you mentioned shard-hunting, or is it in the future? very confusing. nice try but i don't think i'm interested in reading the whole thing. but don't discourage, it's still very funny, just not for my tastes is all.
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  • From labelle on May 27, 2008
    O M G this is the best thing i have read in a long time good job!!!!
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  • From ANON - Korai_Tombo on May 27, 2008
    Wow! Wtf is going on? A starbucks, barnes & noble and an 0live Garden, 500 years in the past while they hunt down naraku and jewel shards.... i am so confused!
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  • From SweatyCup on May 26, 2008
    Is Miroku gonna have to buy it back from a vender or something??
    lol
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  • From SweatyCup on May 26, 2008
    Okaaaayyyyy.....WTF??!!
    This story is SOOO weird.
    I like it!!!
    Sesshoumaru is a bad bad dog leaving other peoples penis' around just to go up a womens kimono.
    Soooo what time IS this story in???
    How do you go from a nail salon to a village?
    Or from a hot spring to a Barns & Noble?
    I like the weird-ness so far!
    Write more soon.
    Love Always^
    ^Dei Dei
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  • From tash1021 on May 26, 2008
    LMAO
    this is great, i love it
    i can barely wait for then next part
    please update soon
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  • From angelnomiko on May 25, 2008
    wow .. she show talk to sessy about some of those things... please please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From on May 24, 2008
    I love it! this story is fricken hilarious. I haven't laughed that hard in a long time! =D
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on May 24, 2008
    Talk about a famous last line. I don't think I will ever forget it. That was priceless. I hope to see a new chapter soon.

    Take care!
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  • From angelnomiko on May 24, 2008
    wow that was great .. please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From sugar0o on May 24, 2008
    *pops the review cherry* haha

    OMFG. drunk or not this is well, its hilarious. your so talented with the funny its scary. *squints and grins* this r0o finds herself highly amused by your story. and wishes that you would update again soon! fantastic job ^_^ - r0o
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