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Reviews for After All, You are mine

By : Ayana
  • From cshadow on March 31, 2009
    Definately bring Kouga into the mating. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
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  • From on November 21, 2008
    please update soon or else you will be labled: Evil!
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  • From Keshia515 on November 19, 2008
    hi! ^_^ i love your first chapter and i think that it a good story all together but you spelling sesshomaru wrong you spelled it with a h like this shesshomaru its spelled like this seshhomaru.. i know it's annoting im sorry i just wanted you to know.
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  • From Vyper on November 12, 2008
    I almost thought of this as a one shot story. It isn't bad though.
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  • From dela1 on November 12, 2008
    It is cute the way you have sess and inu. Miro and sango are cute too
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  • From midnightsweet on June 09, 2008
    cute endding, up-date soon
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  • From dela1 on June 08, 2008
    really good story cant wait for next part
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  • From nchsmi on June 07, 2008
    That was very good, update soon. Please! B reading U!
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  • From mls1971 on June 07, 2008
    love this story!!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! hope you updated soon!!!! keep up the great work!!!!
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  • From Izzanami on June 07, 2008
    Great story so far, I like how you got them together right away; please update!
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  • From Kuragari75 on June 06, 2008
    I like it, well done and a good idea. I only have one pointer for you.. there were a few places where you switched tenses from present to past and then back again.
    ex.: 'Inuyasha growls and grumbled his entire way to the old tree in his forest.' 'growls' and 'grumbled' are in opposite tenses. In this case it should either be 'growled and grumbled' or 'growls and grumbles.'
    A small difference I know... but sometimes it can make things confusing for your readers. just something to watch for ^^.
    liking the story, and I'll be watching for an update! Well Done!
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