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Reviews for Consumed Desires

By : CrazyOnDisplay
  • From YoukaiFate on July 13, 2008
    LOL! I just caught the error on "low" - I meant "flow," you have good flow.

    Writing reviews after midnight is never a smart idea...still, I did enjoy this one-shot, and I hope you write more.

    Fate
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  • From YoukaiFate on July 13, 2008
    Okay, this was downright hot. Wow. You have gotten my hentai juices flowing with this one. (leer) I hope you write more, you have a good style, I saw few gramatical errors, and it kept my interest. You have a nice grasp of low and your description was---well--descriptive enought that it made my eyes cross in dreamy contemplation. =P

    Look forward to more!
    Fate
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  • From pwsmcf on June 24, 2008
    Great story, loved the discription!
    YOu had me guess all the way to the end on the pairing ^^
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