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Reviews for How All Came to Be

By : IndigoMiko
  • From snowbird on August 23, 2008
    I just discovered this story and I love it. It is so emotionally full of tragedy along with budding feelings between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I'm glad you're taking it slow with them. Some people believe in love at first sight, but I don't. I think it takes time to build trust, friendship, and attraction before love comes. Also, he's not constantly having 'conversations' with his beast. I've never liked the 'conversations' in stories, even if the story is good. It's better and more natural when his beast gives him certain feelings and impressions as a form of communication. I want to believe that the beast is responsible for their auras bonding so tightly. I think his beast side recognized her as a potential mate and is slowly helping his humanoid side with his slowly budding feelings for her. To me it's a nice explanation, but you, of course, may have a different idea altogether. You are a very talented writer and I've liked everything you've wrote so far. Especially the way you write about and describe their emotions. You make the reader feel along with them. This story is definitely on my fav list.
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  • From Noacat on August 09, 2008
    Love this story. LOVE IT!

    Side note, I also happen to come from the hand shaped state. I live on the south-western part of the palm -- near the end of the "head-line" in palmistry. ^_^
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  • From sysclp on August 05, 2008
    Excellent story! I look forward to each update and only wish they could come more frequently. :-) Keep up the good work!
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  • From DarkTigress on August 05, 2008
    Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!!! ^_^
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  • From MilanaDespana on August 03, 2008
    Wow, this is an astonishing story, I have never read anything like it, there have been moments where I have laughed and moments where I have been angry and moments where I have actually cried. You are an amazing author and I cannot wait until the next chapter is updated. I love how you are not rushing the relationship of Sesshomaru and Kagome and I especially love how much thought you have put into this story. I hope to see another chapter soon, and once again I would like to tell you that you are a wonderful author.
    Milana Despana
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  • From swasdiva on July 28, 2008
    Well, that chapter left me breathless. So many twists and turns, so many intriguing, suspicious mysteries...my head and heart are spinning. I love how you've built up the connection between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, as well as the insidious suspense around Inuyasha's transformation. And what's up with this Maki chick?? Effortless, epic storytelling as always, Indigo Miko! I'm besotted with this story!
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  • From on July 25, 2008
    That chapter was very powerful. I hope you update again soon.
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  • From DaichiChiru13 on July 14, 2008
    I am loving this story...this is the first one that I have ever read that is like a story ^.^ Awesomeness. Please keep up the amazing job!
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  • From on July 13, 2008
    Whoa! This story is great. I'm addicted now. I can't wait until next update!
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  • From caliha on July 10, 2008
    WONDERFUL
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  • From SharaeNightWalker on July 09, 2008
    Am loving this story. please continue writing...
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  • From Tricia1224 on July 08, 2008
    So far this story is really good. I do worry about InuYasha though. I hope he is alright.
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  • From sysclp on July 06, 2008
    Good job so far, I really like this one. Both daiyouai and taiyoukai are correct, the latter being more of a title I think while the first means "greater youkai" from what I remember. Update soon!

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