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Reviews for Your Return

By : Ruuka
  • From Archfiend on August 03, 2008
    Sorry for the last review, but those were my honest opinions. This chapter though is quite good, as it shows us how Rin arrived at the castle and also lets me think that her friend may still be important for the future story. Of course the chapter length was not very long, though those are the designs of the author and if you feel comfortable with them, then so be it. What I found interesting was the change that Rin has obviously undergone during her stay at the castle, as she is far more comfortable with the concept of servants, though it was very sweet what Sesshoumaru allowed her to do as they arrived in the castle, I mean she is allowed to come to him whenever she needs to or even wants to, in fact that alone shows how much he cares about her. It will be interesting as of how you will describe her past, present and future, and how her relationship with Sesshoumaru chanfes, from daughter to probably eventually lover and mate. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From Archfiend on August 02, 2008
    The chapter seems strangely cut off and unfinished, there is a feeling that there should be something more coming, but there isn`t anything!! Please extend the chapter and repost it, for it seems incomplete. Or at least post a next chapter soon. I do hopee this goes somewhere, because the poem was tops and if it is any indication of the relationship enjoyed by them then this story has definite potential.
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