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Reviews for Desecration

By : salomewilde
  • From AlyceInWandaarando on July 14, 2011
    I like this, is so evil, but I can see the beautiful message in it. I don't really care too much for SessRin, as the only reason I see them liking each other because she's a girl and he's a guy, who are both equally attractive (possibly more so for Rin when she get's older) so it is possible for a pairing, but other than that, I'm not a die hard SessRin fan, so this doesn't offend me at all. Plus, I don't see how a child Rin can ever be sexual with Sesshoumaru and not feel any pain or anguish. Not that I'm hatting on the pair, but this feels more natural than the whole lovey dovey crap I've been reading. I actually didn't feel uncomfortable reading from Sesshoumaru's POV (I hate first person). You made his character very believable; not saying he's cruel, or that he would do something like that to Rin, but if he would, you narrated him perfectly.
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  • From pseudohanyou on October 04, 2008
    Have I told you just HOW MUCH I love this piece? And that it was dedicated to me makes it all the more wonderful. =] The rage he feels when it comes to his situation and conflict with Rin drips from every single line. His resolve makes it insanely hot. He is at a loss for what to do to quell his indecision and confusion, and so he resorts to this. Fucking HOT.

    This line made me positively shudder: I am no savior, Rin--your life comes at a price.

    Such beautiful darkness from one who doesn't like to write dark!fic. I loved that you went out of your comfort zone to write this. It was SO worth it.
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  • From Pumpkinpi on September 24, 2008
    Good one. I never read a fanfiction that said Sesshoumaru had posion in his sperm. Very creative.
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