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By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From fallonkali on December 30, 2008
    Very nice oneshot. I have little to complain about except for some word choices. While 'clit', 'cock', and 'pussy' are all accurate it does not seem the best choice of words for the overall telling of this particular story. Other than that, like I said, very nice. I really like Inuyasha's ranting at the end.
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  • From ANON - Ronwixziv Barreiro on November 20, 2008
    A very interesting story that DESPIRATLY needs -
    A Beta reader, spell check, punctuation, and a healthy dosage of continuity. But other than that, not bad
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  • From midnightsweet on November 01, 2008
    i like it.
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  • From Vyper on October 28, 2008
    This was funny. I liked the end very much.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2008
    This was odd. Not bad, just odd. I see the potential for a really cute story, however that disrupted because in my opinion the sex scene was described to literally, too directly. A little allusion goes a long way.
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