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By : tgbrunner02
  • From ANON - Shellnet on December 22, 2016

    To bad you stopped it was good and not to much like twilight it went well


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  • From opiumdreams09 on February 11, 2009
    I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY IT IS COOL HOW YOU PUT IT IN INUYASHA STORY FORM "LOL" CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU SOON!!!!
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  • From L0VER on January 02, 2009
    WEELL. i went to watch the movies. it wasn't bad .. nor was it really good. if you didn't read the book, it would've been horrible. but my god, is edward sexy. his family too. ahah, well. i like how this is going, update soon!
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  • From kirarakat55 on January 01, 2009
    This story is amazing! I was away for a little while and when I came back there was Claimed. I'm not, however, familiar with the plot or characters of Twilight, as I haven't read the books yet. But this story is intriguing to say the least. Once I finish 1984, that will be the next book on my list.

    Oh, and the 'sneak peaks' are a nice touch. They keep me yearning for more. I can't wait for the next chapter, and their first kiss.

    **Sorry for the double post but I am typing on my iPhone and it tends to substitue words.
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  • From osherry on December 30, 2008
    Hi ya. Ah! The infamous van scene where Kagome/Bella is saved by a man with supernatural strength and speed. Hee hee! Now is Inuyasha driving a silver volvo as well? Does he have a thing for driving over the speed limit? Thanks for another great chapter. You are right that the movie isn't nearly as good as the books. But it's not bad. My sister read the books and loved the movie. Personally I think the movie was a little confusing if you hadn't read the books first (especially the beginning sequence). But since I had read the books, I found it entertaining. Not bad, not good, just somewhere in between. Edward was cute on screen and the scenes of the Pacific Northwest were breathtaking. So it was worth my $7.

    Now after you have read all four Twilight books you have to check out something online. Go to Stephenie Meyer’s official website so that you can download ‘Midnight Sun’ a free, unfinished re-telling of ‘Twilight’ from Edward’s perspective. It is an absolutely awesome read and it should help you with writing your chapters since you get to see everything from Edward's perspective (including Alice's prediction that he was going to fall in love with Bella and how he fought it tooth and nail). Great stuff.

    I'm glad that you read Silly Human Mating Rituals. It was my first fan fict. It had heart, but it wasn't very polished. My current story 'A Grudging Loss' (which is an AU set in modern times) started with one beta and now has three betas. It's really polished, better written and I think it shines more than anything else I've done.

    Keep writing!
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  • From Lavizzy on December 30, 2008
    okay so i read all the twilight books and at first i thought "hey this is REALLY like inuyasha in a way"

    then i find this story and WOW i LOVE it....

    UPDATE!
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  • From hanyoufan on December 29, 2008
    Woot! I was wondering when you were going to update! :) This was a great chapter - maybe a tiny rushed at some points, but all around very good. And things are progressing nicely! *wipes hands together evilly* I love it! And oooohhhh...we get a kiss in the next chapter! SQUEEE!!! I can't wait! Oh, and no, I haven't read the series. I'll have to add it to my list! Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on December 29, 2008
    I just reread my review and realized I had left half of a sentence off. LOL I meant that I was going to have to get a copy of the whole series. If only I was heading towards work soon...
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on December 29, 2008
    I loved that bit about the mockery of Koga and them were allegedly supposed to be werewolves. That was good. I intend to read the series... now I just have to get ahold of a copy. LOL I hope your sister is feeling better. Take care and update soon. Happy holidays.
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  • From DoctorWho on December 13, 2008
    You're writing a fanfiction based on a horribly bad and unoriginal series for whiney teenage girls. Yeah, I don't have to say more.

    One Star.

    Be original.
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  • From ShadowInu on December 12, 2008
    Wow!!! When I was reading Twilight, i saw Inuyasha and Kagome in the place for Bella and Edward quite often. It's really cool that your doing this little crossover type fic. I think you're doing a fantastic job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From socalgal on December 06, 2008
    I LOVED this movie! And you're writing about it! (screams) Yea! It's awesome so far! Keep goin!
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  • From abydospersephone on December 03, 2008
    The story looks interesting, though I know nothing about Twilight.

    I have one small constructive criticism based on the first chapter, and I admit it's really nitpicky, but I hope you'll use it to make your story even better:

    Kagome going by airplane from Tokyo to Kyoto: First of all, there is no airport in Kyoto; the closest one is in Osaka (but most people don't know that, so don't worry about it). Also, most of the time using the shinkansen (bullet train) is cheaper, and only takes about three hours from Tokyo station if you take the HIKARI shinkansen.
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  • From L0VER on November 26, 2008
    is this going to exactly the same as twilight? and omg.. i felt bad for the guy who was chasing after bella in the beginning! ahah. did you see the movie yet?
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  • From hanyoufan on November 26, 2008
    Wow - so InuYasha is making the first move to be friends...or more? It's interesting to see Miroku so uptight...I guess it's natural to be protective/suspicious/whatever when they supposedly only interact with each other. This was a great update - I can't wait for the next! And I'm glad everything with Harmony is okay now - hopefully no more problems!
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