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Reviews for Dominance

By : BlackMaiden
  • From ANON - kathleen on October 29, 2009
    for me this story was good i would like to see it finnish have a beginning middle and and end this ia adult fan ficiton and all deviance is done here for a reader to complain about subject matter adult child sexual relationships, rape, same sex, group sex, fetishes,beastiality,not that i condone child (underage of 18 a minor)and someone who is older than that to engage in those activities but those things took place back in the day and lords and kings could do those things without being looked down upon slaves were also included in that because they were property and women were included in that as well and it was not til the 20th it stopped eventhough there are certain people have this thing with having sex with children 12-16year old but back then girls as soon as their first monthly cycle started they were married off and had children my grandmother was 13 when she had her first child she was born at the turn of the century my mother was born in 1921 and im for if they have a problem with the story dont read it to me it is a good story and id like to see where it ends
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  • From ANON - catcopy on October 28, 2009
    I am sorry I am not the best reviewer around, I have a tendency to write reviews once in a while. I do rate them if I really like certain chapters. I am sorry you feel the way you do.
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  • From jkbtb on October 28, 2009
    I have to admit I didn't read much (skimmed mostly) since I am not so much of a fan of Sessh and rin but I think it was written very well. I do thank you though for taking time out and writing something for others to enjoy.
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  • From Tricia1224 on October 28, 2009
    I am disappointed that you will no longer be posting your stories here. I was wondering what happened to World Trade Center. I wish you would stay, but I understand. I am unfortunately one of those people who does not review often. If I like a story I will let the author know in a review. I will also say that I will tell a person about spelling and grammar issues too. If I really don't like a story I won't tell the author, because I don't have the same taste in stories. I never thought about reviewing every chapter a person writes. I just did not think an author wanted to hear the same thing from the same person for every chapter. Yes I will contact you on your email to find out how this story ends. Good luck with getting your book published.
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  • From ANON - sarah on October 28, 2009
    dear writer
    dont know if its to late...but i just read your story and want you to know i like it so far...and if you get this i would to read the rest....you said you have a live journal is it the same name as blackmaiden...just wanted to say again i really like your story and i would like to read more of your stories your a good writer...
    thanxs for you time sarah
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  • From ANON - Fairqueen on October 28, 2009
    i realize reviews r important to an author, but to hold a story because of lack of reviews is very something that is in very poor taste. To start a story and not finish show a character fault. i will not be read anymore stories with your name on. and by the way i usually wait until the end of a story to give a review so as not to disturb the flow of what the author wants to write.

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  • From ANON - SeshoumaruPrincess on October 28, 2009
    Im am definatly sorry to hear that no one reviews your stories and i personaly appoligize as for my self not commenting, I am not the best writter so I never have a good advice[at least thats wat i think] but your fic is really awsome and one of the best dark fics I have read.

    so sorry for never even leaving a thank you for being such a talented and awsome author
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  • From ANON - fallennagel on October 28, 2009
    hello!!

    please don´t stop posting here!! i love your work you have great writing skills

    Dominance is my favorite story I have been following it since the first chapter I absolutly love it!!

    wow! you do know how to write lemons and it isn´t just lemon without a reason your descriptions and the reasons why sessh acts like he does are fantastic. I was so anxious to read the continuation such a cliffhanger!! but,I´ve just read your last post and I thik you are right, personally I havent´t review ´cause writing in english is not my forte you see, I´m from Nuevo Leon,Mexico jejeje I understand perfectly the language reading,listening,speaking(with horrible accent)but writing...I have problems with grammar but anyways I hope you´ll still be posting here and if not I´ll be following at your livejournal

    good luck!!

    bye
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  • From Pumpkinpi on October 07, 2009
    Oh shit, and Serena is in a deep pile of it! No telling what her new psycho mate will do once he finds her. Look forward to the next Chapter!
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  • From Tricia1224 on September 30, 2009
    Wow this story is definitely an interesting read. I do feel for Seara, her treatment was horrible. But She is dealing with a demon. He warned her. I can see her fleeing in fear. Hell, I just hope she isn't laying somewhere bleeding to death. She really needs something to help with her bleeding. But maybe she ran so he would kill her. Fear makes people do stupid things. Can't wait for the next chapter. That was one wicked cliffie.
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  • From LadyMist on September 30, 2009
    I love this story! Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru is so great. I'm excited for the next chapter.
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  • From SesshysTrueMate1 on September 16, 2009
    Hey! Thanks! I just wrote it because I was in this weitd mood, at the time, you know...? Thanks for the comment!

    SesshysTrueMate1

    BTW, my name is Ashley, I'm 18, engaged, and I'm going to collage!
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  • From Pumpkinpi on September 01, 2009
    Great three shot so far, I look forward to an update!!!
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  • From Reymond on August 14, 2009
    You give a interesting aspect of youkai dominance in the intercourse and I like it. Glad to read your story. I hope the poor Seara will not be too harshly taken !!
    Thank you for your story !

    A french mother and reader,
    Bonjour de la France

    Merely Truth
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  • From ANON - brittbritt on August 13, 2009
    I like this story. I love the fact that its different "no love" is involed and its about time, also i like to see this side of sesshoumaru. I really think you did a good job. And lastly please try not to take so long on updating, a lot of times this makes the reader have to read the story all over again to make sure they remember the story. If you have reader's block try to ask for suggestions maybe that will help. But anyway great story.
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