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Reviews for Tales Of A Youkai Frat House

By : ShouraiChan

From ANON - Darkryubaby on March 23, 2014
wow...rin the whore. yes I said it and she's a dumb whore too. who the fuck cares about the pics!! they tried to rape her. They've openly admitted to killing and raping other girls. I think that is more important than a few naked and bound pics. actually it only proves that they held her against her will and were going to do horrible things. So what if miroku released her. HE'S STILL A MURDERING RAPIST!!! Like the fuck girl, get a clue. and she has the nerve to thank him, like he was doing it out of the kindness of her heart. I hate dumb bitches and this story seems to be filled with them. I'm not saying you're a bad writer but I think I'm gonna back away from this story before I lose my mind hating all the characters.
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From RuDoragon on June 27, 2009
I wanted to shake the computer when I got to the end of the chapter. This is a really, Really, REALLY great story. I'm glad nothing happened to Rin. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Update soon. ^_~
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From hanyoufan on April 11, 2009
Oh, noez! And I thought we were getting ready for some Inu/Kag nookie! *pouts dramatically* Come on, girl! I seriously need to read some action! :D Sheesh, guess I'll have to go write my own!

Speaking of which, I need to PM you...expect a message from me on LJ. LOL

Anyway, amazing chapter, girlie! I'm so into this story, and I'm waiting to see how InuYasha deals with Miroku's betrayal...me thinks that won't be pretty! Update soon! 0.~
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From scarletwitchextreme on April 05, 2009
Hey ShouraiChan,
its me again your fav fangirl reader/reviewer...lol. OMG OMG I am so glad I got u rave on my reply so much...giggles.. I feel so special thx..lol I laughed so hard when I read your reply. *hugs writer and squeezes* I LOVE THIS ChAPTER it was unexpected. Please never apologize for ruining panties, it is your duty really feel honoured...ROFL Miroku is offically meh boy, I am sorry I did not expect to help rin escape on nothing more than a date, and oh my god he cares for her, at first I thought it was another one of his sinister plot to taunt rin for this sick game they were playing but how he helped her and held when she cried, and didnt ask for more than a date. I am flabbergasted. She is so innocent poor thing is so confused but I so glad that she is feeling for him, and Happy danced when kagome got her. *Hugs shourai again* I know kagome will understand and I am sorry but I demand a rin/miroku in this fic they r my fav couple now...lol. I hope they end up together...sigh with wistful eyes* Oh and I loved the whole kags/inu chemistry but I am sorry for his ass with kagome rage please make the fight have plenty of ripped clothing, scratching and groping and a fight for domination....sorry there my fangirl mind ran away with me....not really sorry though.hahahaha oh and whats gonna happen between kouga and kags now that rin knows he is part of the brotherhood. OH my so much has hit the ceiling oh its on. Update soon.

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Scarlet
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From tintin23 on April 03, 2009
Okay....I love how you did this!!!!!!!

And yes even if you blush again, I believe this story could be just like Shades of Gray...and you are so welcome, I don't usually share that story with a lot of people unless I feel they could really handle it. Now down to the real business here....

UPDATE SOON! I want to...no I NEED to see what Kagome plans on doing with our 'innocent' Inuyasha. Thanks to you I'll be sitting on the edge of my sit trying to wait for a new update. O.
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From Alpine02 on April 02, 2009
Dun dun dun... Love it.. as always.. I am having such a hard time choosing which fic of yours I enjoy most.. AND... There was no 'hanky panky' between Kougs and Kags either.. (giggle)

Couldn't help myself from adding that..
Hugs and can't wait for more, as always.. I sound like a broken record.
Alpine
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From scarletwitchextreme on March 25, 2009
Hey shouraiChan,
HUGS to a great author and another good chapter. But first I am so humbled and happy that u loved mu reviews so much and I am so pleased that it is appreciated. BOWS. And I only review this way to ppl who deserve it and trust me my dear u have peaked my naughty interests and I love your fic so much I am foaming at the mouth and destroying panties...lol. And I only speak the truth in my reviews so again I am happy for your excitement and 3 separate replies...yayayayayayaa. And u have my imagination running so much with this story and I LOVE a DOMINATING INU so badly. And yes sesshy in Inu's position is frightening, and yes there was a slight little mention of him...lol. Your rin is a sweet firecracker, and i am glad its her in that position cause it makes the story all that more interesting and geez I appluad u for making miroku seem sinister as naraku and just as smooth...a spider demon he tie me up in his web....lol. And I am begging and pleading like a whore on the corner in the throes of ecstacy for more rin/miroku in this story its just to yummy to pass up. Please...MORE, PLEase release me....lol lol
I am pleased u also like my review on the state of other ppl wanting u to change inu and i am honoured that u like my response so much u quoted me...lol. Anyway onto the 4th chappy, geez it that is a party, and i have been to some parties like that where anything goes even sex on the wall, heck I think i was guilty of that one time too, hey u only live once...muahahahaha. Anyway i loved the tension and revelations and POV in this chapter. i loved that kouga is wary of inuyasha around kagome, and especially the fact how miroku witnessed them on the dance floor. i think the chapter was rightly named...lol. So the attraction begins. So let the game truly begin, I hope kouga doesn't get hurt to bad when shit hits the ceiling between kags and inu...sigh I am just so scared what they r gonna do with rin as well. I cant wait for next chapter cause I want to know...pouts and sighs. Keep up the great domineering and dark writing and update soon please.

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Scarlet
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From osherry on March 21, 2009
Hi ya girl.

Oh dear! 'He wondered what would happen if he stole a peak into her heart. What kind of torrid fantasies would he find there? Which ones could he make real?' I'm assuming this has something to do with his little box that he's trying to keep hidden. I'm just guessing, but it must be something that has been handed down over the last 1000 years so that the youkai in charge can get a woman to sleep with him (so that he can get her powers). Ah! So that's why Inuyasha isn't a rapist? He can manipulate a woman into having sex with him? Well, I still think Inu is BAD. I'm rooting for Koga now. (Which again, makes me so sad since I am an Inu/Kag shipper...)

Ok so what's next? Will Kagome rescue Rin in time (I hope). Is Kilala on the way? Will Sango show up in her sexy outfit and get Miroku's panties in a bunch? Is Inuyasha going to start to fall for Kagome mainly because he can't have her since she is Koga's? And what will Inuyasha find when he examines her heart? If she's anything like the manga version she'll have a pure heart. I wonder how he'll take that?

OK. Please redeem Inuyasha... I hope...
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From tintin23 on March 19, 2009

Wow, this story has plot, sex, drugs, sex, passion, sex, originality, oh did I mention sex. This is great. Please keep it going. If you continues like this I could so see this story being put up there with 'Shades of Gray' by fallenangel7583. It is really that good, please give us more.
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From Alpine02 on March 19, 2009
Yay for updates is right... You say you will update soon.. and look at that, there it is.. This story really has my interest piqued... I really can't wait to see how Inu/Kag goes from here... Please update again soon.. I will always leave a loving review...
Hugs
Alpine
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From hanyoufan on March 19, 2009
Great update! Ooh, the tension is mounting, and I LOVE it! And yes, InuYasha is super-hot in this story...gotta love the evil side! Don't know what it is, but it just does it for me! :P Can't wait to see the next chapter and the "festivities!" XD
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From Alpine02 on March 16, 2009
This is AWESOME!!! I absolutely love it... Can not wait to see how this is going to play out.
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From scarletwitchextreme on March 10, 2009
lord excitement and drama, and I actually like kouga and kagome together in here I love his attitude and demeanour and I find myself wanting kagome and kouga to stay hooked up and not like inuyasha in this fic but that is just my preference, and congratulations on making me like kouga for kags more that inu cause that has never happened in the history of me reading fics...lol. I just want poor kags to find rin...lord I love this fic so please keep up the good work and update soon, and I just want kags to purify inuyasha sorry ass.

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Scarlet
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From scarletwitchextreme on March 10, 2009
OMG OMG chapter 2 was brilliant poor rin oh lord, and gods they are goin to rape her and geez i actually loved the chenistry between miroku and rin and I wouldnt mind seeing that all i have to say is poor kohaku. Inuyasha is an asshole but i will never ask u to change him or redeem him, if u want to do that it your story I love how u lay everything out and hate ppl wanting to read dark dominating fic but wants the author to change their character just because thay dont like it (I read your reviews). Anyway I hope the girls find them and kags can kick his ass. And i cant wait to see how kags and inuyasha will meet. On to chapter 3

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Scarlet
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From scarletwitchextreme on March 10, 2009
hey this is brilliant I have just read the first chapter and I had to stop and review otherwise I would have gone mad with excitement. It is amazing what u did with concept and I love cause its so different and definately dark and inuyasha a short of a beast but I could smell the domination coming and my panties leap for joy...lol. I love how u lay out the characters and storyline is interesting and has me asking alot of question, but I am mad at inuyasha for being such a heartless, souless bastard and heck if that is inuyasha what was sesshoumaru like in that position...? anyway I am so scared and frigthened for kags and the other girls and of the madness that these guys are going to put them through. And honestly inuyasha cant be killing so much without anyone having a clue where these girls are disappearing to, anyway gotta go back and read the rest.

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Scarlet
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