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By : osherry
  • From weyrdkat on July 06, 2011
    Kara and Ai -- great new chapter. I could almost feel the stickiness from the heat and blood in the air. I think you did a fantastic job of portraying the turmoil Sesshy felt at not being able to stop Jak and save Rin while in the barrier. And the oppression of the seals weighing on them. I can't wait to read the next chapter and was so glad to see that you two had updated!
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  • From darkone2 on April 13, 2011
    I like this story. It is real intense and well written. Please continue!!!
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  • From Silent Pluto on December 11, 2010
    lmao! Wow, now things are popping!!!
    This is just great!
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  • From DanceWithoutSun on July 18, 2010
    One of the best stories, in my opinion, that I've read so far. This story is the reason I made an account. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From kirarakat55 on June 16, 2010
    I don't know how to put into words...but this story his hilariously, deliciously hot! I'm not a huge yuri fan, but the Inuyasha turned girl and Kags action is hot! Seriously! I know when they get their freaks on she sees Inu and not Shaya, but still. Delish! Oh, and, Rin is a fool! I know she's pissed at Seashy, buy with a lover like that--not just damn, double damn! I sooo can't wait for the next update!
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  • From weyrdkat on May 12, 2010
    Great new chapter Ai.

    I like the tension and the softer side of Kori/Kouga. I also really liked your portrayal of Kagome's angry/revenge streak and her determination to drive Inu/Shaya crazy. The introduction to Jak was pretty spot on as well, even if I tend to think of him more like FallenAngel's Shades of Grey Jak. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work!

    Ja! Kat
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  • From ForGetMeNot on February 21, 2010
    I LOVE this story! I've been checking every day to see if you have posted new chapters yet. When is the next chapter coming out? PLEASE update soon! ITS AWESOME!
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  • From Verakum on February 09, 2010
    GOD you are the best that is the most sexy and hottest inuKagome Fic i have read.. inuyasha and kagome are so hot for me.. i would love to fuck them both :P
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  • From Silent Pluto on February 08, 2010
    Oh My Gawd!
    man that was exhilarating!
    I'm soo into this story it's not even funny!
    Hah! Ranma! lol
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  • From weyrdkat on February 01, 2010
    OOOHHHH!! Busted! That is so funny. It's awesome that you added in Ranma -- I guess I was expecting Ataru to show up any minute while you're in what's supposed to be an all-girls pool. I can not wait to see how he tries to explain this one away -- but you've shown that Kagome is not all oblivious and is starting to get the feeling something is not right -- especially when it comes to her feelings and feeling on him. :) You've kept the new chapters coming pretty frequently and I'm really great-ful. It's been killing the tedium at work in the afternoons to read such a great story.

    Keep up the great work and keep those chappies coming!

    Kat -- weyrdkat@msn.com
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  • From weyrdkat on January 28, 2010
    Oh Kami - Karu! That was awesome! Too funny to first make Sesshiles take it and be forced to sit there. It was just priceless - how the mighty have fallen. But for her to be there and not tell her sister? And then complain that she didn't get a chance to explain? She's the one that disappeared.
    But Inu-kun! His mom is so awesome. And Ataru -- I love Lum. Have you seen "It's a Rumic World?" Too funny! I hope he can hold out or find a way to explain to Kags before she goes nuts on him and figures it out herself.

    Great work! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Silent Pluto on January 21, 2010
    lmao oh my gawd this is hillarious!!!!!
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  • From sbbjanimefans on December 13, 2009
    i wanted to know if you would mind if i write a story with the same plot as your i have framed stuff already but i wanted to ask first so i dont offend anyone
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  • From sbbjanimefans on November 23, 2009
    awsome story. it made me laugh so much. keep writing i can't wait for more chapters.
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  • From Silent Pluto on November 09, 2009
    rofl what an update. Kouga has rotten luck! lol
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