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By : Vyper
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  • From ANON - kyoko21 on March 23, 2012
    I love it! SSSSSSOOOOO MUCHHHHHHH!!!!! Though I'm a late reader... hehehe... V(^-^')V
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  • From ajj77sunhawk on July 27, 2009
    good story thank you!!!
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  • From Nekoluver666 on April 29, 2009
    I have yet to finish this fic and I'm not sure if I even will yet. Practically all of the characters are so out of character that it's not even funny! Ok well...it IS funny, but yeah. Your fic is hilarious simply because it's so absurd, but not in a bad way. I love it to pieces! The whole Sesshoumaru peeing on Inu Yasha had me falling out of my chair I was laughing so hard! Omg...I can't even breathe properly I'm busting up so much. *wipes tear from eye* Hhhaaaa I lurve yew. x3
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  • From aleabeth on March 23, 2009
    nice waff-e ending. :)
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  • From nchsmi on March 23, 2009
    This was totally awesome!!!! NOW on to the sequel! Awesome!!!!
    B reading U!
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  • From ANON - ladytokyo on March 23, 2009
    OMG this is such a great story. I'm so happy that I kept reading it and the updates are so great. thanks can't wait to read the squeal.

    Ladytokyo
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  • From Izzanami on March 23, 2009
    I just sat and read this entire story. I liked that, you must have been busy because I was here a few days ago, and it wasn't here. I give you "a big thumbs up". Um the story code crap, I put up all the story codes for what I have planned at the first chapter, and then add more if they apply as I go. Don't worry about it. I guess I get the idea of say a person reading a fic and maybe it has for example BDSM, and the author didn't put it in and them getting upset, but it was a FIRST chapter. I dont know not much bothers me in stories except for rape and torture, and I was ok with the bit of rape in your story, it wasn't too bad, although I wish it hadn't happened, but it is your fic and it's we should all write what we like. I don't pay attention to much to codes for my own reading, so I never thought of them being there to get more reviews or readers.

    I'd suggest just putting them at the beginning of each chapter, then no one can ever say that you didn't warn them. I just copy/paste the beginning codes for each story into a new chapter then add if needed, and no one's ever complained, so you could do that, or you could just write. I'd be happy to read a sequel regardless.

    So it's complete, now I 'm disappointed (because I enjoyed it), but a sequel sounds cool. Inuyasha in a kimono sewing was funny (I don't mean it in a bad way, I just got a picture in my head of him sitting there humming quietly as he embroidered away), though I had him sewing in my new fic, but that was funny too.

    I love Sesshoumaru's demon, I love when he talks more primitively. I always thought that when their demon or more feral animalistic behaviors came out they would either speak more primitively or would use what I call "Inu". Sessh's demon is adorable. I'd love to see them when their pups are a little older and they have more, but I love m/preg, preggers InuYasha is cute. I'd be more than happy to read any Sessh/Inu you put up though. I hope you come up with a sequel soon. *more thumbs up*
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  • From Vyper on March 23, 2009
    Ok guys, that was the last chapter....if I go on it will just get drawn out and well.........I have to say a sequil is in order for such purposes. Tell me what you think.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on March 22, 2009
    hey been awhile. i'm liking this story. u had to sell me on this one though. i like that sesshou is finally in sync with his demon. looking forward to the next update. til next time. ttyl!
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  • From Vyper on March 21, 2009
    I agree the chapters are getting a bit rushed, but at the same time I am trying not to slow down too much, however, I am going to be doing so today since my husband is coming home from Korea. I need to spend some serious time with him so I will continue on, but probably not at the same pace. 7 chapters a day is pretty draining on the brainy. However I have started another chapter and I am working on it. The hardest part is the poetry and making it fit in with the chapters. I love doing it though. I wanted this fic to be rather special. Thanks for your support everyone and will keep writing. I am probably going to do about two chapters a day if I can so expect fast updating, but at a bit of a slower pace.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2009
    i like the idea of this story. i love the poetry at the beginning of each chapter. the chapters themselves seem a little rushed. i would like to read a little more emotional development and adjustment, especially where chapter 17 left off. something such as that has to make a huge difference in the relationship. it would be a great opportunity to explore the angsty side a little.
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on March 21, 2009
    please continue please continue please continue!!!
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  • From dela1 on March 20, 2009
    I love sess mom she is so cool can t wait for the next part
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  • From aleabeth on March 20, 2009
    Sure there ain't some rabbit geneology in there somewhere?

    Go momma Inu! LOL
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