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Reviews for Unnatural

By : chicke222
  • From Nipisha5 on September 03, 2010
    MMMMMMOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE!!!!
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  • From lukymiko on August 26, 2009
    This might be very interesting. Keep it up.
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  • From Fourshotchild on July 25, 2009
    Aw, this is an interesting crossover. I'm such
    a sucker for Twilight and Inuyasha. I'm happy you
    came up with the idea. Can Kagome keep her holy powers
    and be mated with Edward? I just kind of found this
    strange. I mean in the books Edward is like 'Bella you
    don't want to be a monster like me,' so is he just
    going to change Kagome without a fuss? I'm also excited
    that our little priestess will have a blast from the
    past! AND, I can't wait to actually see how Edward and
    Kagome hook up. Good luck with your story!
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  • From ashurinikouru on July 20, 2009
    i really like this story. i just wanted to let you know when i was reading i found a minor mistake in the different pov's of kagome and edward.
    in kagome's POV you stated:
    “My name is Edward Cullen” he continued “I did not have a chance to introduce myself yesterday. You must be Kagome Higurashi.” My mind was spinning and try as I might I could not stop myself. As he spoke my eyes drifted towards his as is only polite when in conversation and I was hooked yet again.
    where it says that edward didn't introduce himself yesterday, where as in edwards POV it stated:
    I kept my eyes on hers, focusing only on their questioning depths, and tried to ignore the appetizing color of her skin. "My name is Edward Cullen," I said, though I knew she knew that. It was the polite way to begin. "I didn't have a chance to introduce myself last week. You must be Kagome Higurashi."
    and in this it says he didnt introduce himself last week.

    i just wanted to inform you of that. but other than that I really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 06, 2009
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From bloodyblond on April 17, 2009
    I'm enjoying the direction you are taking with this story, including Edwards (and the Cullens) point of views. I love seeing inside the characters minds, and I think you pull it off quite well. I'm especially looking forward to the 'confrontation' so to speak, when Kagome and Edward finally figure out what exactly the other is.

    I will admit I noticed a few grammatical errors, but none so large that they take away from the story. Just a few minor spelling mistakes that anyone could overlook. Other then that, the story is flowing wonderfully, and I'm extremely excited for more.

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  • From kiara703 on April 17, 2009
    Great story, first time i've read this pairing. please update soon. can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From Kat021 on April 16, 2009
    This is a great story so far. I like the crossover, and I love how you are going at it. I hope that you update again soon, because I can't wait to read more!
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  • From bloodyblond on April 09, 2009
    I would love to see more on this.. while not a huge fan of the Twilight series, I am a huge fan of Kagome and unusual pairings outside of the Inuyasha verse, plus this story has amazing potential. Especially with Kagomes Miko powers mixing it up.
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  • From Alpine02 on April 01, 2009
    It sure is starting out pretty good... Would like to read more, please update soon.
    Alpine
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