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Reviews for Desperation

By : Ladygraywolf
  • From Sagura87 on January 09, 2012
    Awesome Story!!!! can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - INUblngswitKAG on November 26, 2011
    I just started reading your story, and already I have to limit myself, or I would read the whole thing in one sitting...and while Im studying for exams and finals, that's not to good, but your story is. I use it to fill my break times between vocab, equations, and grammar practice.....your a great writer, and I am going tO love reading Desperation. Thus chapter made me cry, Inu always does when he has a real reason to show his feelings and/or weaknesses(and the author is good...author has to be good, or it sucks) especially involving Kagome and sesshomaru. And while sess seems a little OOC, I actually think if what I think has happened with him in your story, it is very appropriate and IN(U) character behaivior. (I have always taken OOC to mean out of character, but I could nevr find a place to explain all the abbreviations, so t took me months to figure even that out...) any who...oh yeah, what I originally ment to tell you, the actual reason I HAD to review... Inuyashas last line made me cry....which is a good thing, you have feeling and character in your story...keep it up!!! INUblngswitKAG
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  • From MezyMinzy on May 27, 2010
    So... first time reviewing a story (new member), so I might not be doing this right. But
    I just wanted to say I love your story!!!! I've read all the current chapters in the last two days XD. Call me crazy, but its good. I enjoy the characters you made up, and the story with Shadara and her friends as well. Very original, considering its a fan fiction XD. Please keep updating!!! Could use a bit more description, a paragraph here and there, but mostly you get the point across, and the reader knows exactly what it is you want to say. Dialogue is great, and everything said really sounds like something the character would say. All in all, good job!

    Oh, and about the lemons... if you're not comfortable writing them, dont lol. Some people just don't think that way, and if you don't, so what? Don't let the fact that this is an "adult" site make you feel like you have to write stuff like that. Focus on the story, and what you want to write. Don't worry about what other people want, if they want stuff like that, they can go read someones lemon-y oneshots lol. Be yourself!
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  • From Sagura87 on March 01, 2010
    love the story, please update soon
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  • From Animedevildog on December 06, 2009
    Another wonderful Chapter. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 29, 2009
    HOT DAMN!!!

    Yasha's dad and Kikyo?! Now that's a twist I didn't see happening! Or that Shadara had a mate ... or are they really mated and she is just calling to the other half of her soal because of she is watching Kagome and Inu Yasha and the affection they freely share ... maybe that is why she is calling to her mate?!

    *scratches head as eyes whirl in confusion* Way too much for my very tired brain to take in. Working nights kinda sucks becase I've been too tired to come here and FINALLY noticed that you updated! Very happy here! Now I can sleep and process what you have written as I eagerly await your next chapter!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 28, 2009
    Interesting... So Inuyasha's Dad has a continuing role in this wonderful story. And so does Kekiyo. This does continue to draw me in more and more.
    To give you an idea how much I get drawn into the story, I could actually SMELL the toasted cheese sandwiches and tomato soup. Smelled like Campbells Select to be exact. (only a cook would be able to distinguish lol)

    I'll be watching for Chapter 37. and when this story is finally concluded, I shall watch for the next story.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 26, 2009
    Thank you for the update. It was short, but well written. I will have to check out the other story you have posted as well. I CAN'T believe that this one is almost over. It seems too quick!
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 26, 2009
    YIPPIE!! Another chapter!

    Ooooo .... poisoned ... and not a very nice one either! I can fell Inu Yasha's confusion and conflicting emotions, him wanting to hold her and yet knowing that he had to let her go. And his anxiety of what was going on, her having to be chained ...

    Can't wait to see what your next chapter has in store! And from Kagome's view ... I wonder if she is feeling any jealousy(sp?) over all the attention that Shandara is getting from Yasha? Hmm ...

    I will check out your other stories! I didn't realize that you had others posted here!

    Until we meet again.
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  • From ANON - Phoenix Wolf on October 11, 2009
    Yippie! You have returned! You have been missed.

    This is yet another wonderful chapter. I completely forgot about Yasha's father "requesting" that they help the "black wolf". Looks like I am going to have to re-read your fantabulous story ... again. It will only be my third time ... *blush*

    I'm glad that you are feeling better, and I hope that everything went well, considering the circumstances. My offer is still open for if you need to talk.

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on October 10, 2009
    This chapter was well worth the wait. I am glad that you are doing better. I'll be looking forward to chapter 35 :D
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 14, 2009
    You grieve.

    That is all you can do. Hold your husbands hand, your friends and childrens too, and just grieve. Remember what your friend was like, smile and remember even the corniest of jokes, cook your family and friends a meal of your passed friends favorite foods, dedicating the meal in his memory/honor, and remember him together.

    And don't EVER forget to breathe. When you feel like your world is crashing down, and you just want to scream at the world for being so damn unjust, don't forget to brethe. When you are at his funeral, or memorial, don't forget to brethe. Remind yourself of this, and eventually, the tightness in your chest will loosen.

    You should also know that he knew that you cared, he wouldn't have been your friend if you didn't care about him.

    Take as much time as you need to take. We will be here waiting for your return. If you need someone to rant at, and impartial third party, feel free to email me. I've been told that I am a good listener.

    You are in my thoughts.
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  • From Animedevildog on September 13, 2009
    My deepest condolences go out to you in this time of sorrow. I wish I knew of a way to make the sadness go, but only time can do that. Just remember the good times you and your family have shared with your departed friend, and do not be afraid to cry when the need is there.
    *hugs fiercely*
    Just remember, you have fans out here who care, and are praying for you that you may find comfort and solace in your time of hardship. If you ever need someone to talk to, I am always willing to listen if need be.
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  • From PhoenixWolf on September 13, 2009
    Ah, the wonders of intermediate chapters.

    Short though it is, it still had the ability of bringing tears to my eyes at the emotion they were feeling. And I can't help but snicker with the last line of "I am not a damn cat!"

    I'm happy that you are feeling better, and even happier that you updated again so quickly! But still, as much as I would miss another early update, you should rest and get better. Concentrate on healing, and the story will come, and we will wait (anxiously) for your return. ..... just don't take TOO long!! ;}

    Until we meet again.
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  • From Animedevildog on September 12, 2009
    Ok, read Chapter 33, and I loved it. I know what it is like to adopt a sibling, thats hoe I got my two sisters. Although I have only brothers biologically, Brandy and Lisa are closer to me than my own blood. I can see how the two of them would develop such a bond so quickly.
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