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Reviews for The Stranger In My Heart

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From ANON - Lala on September 05, 2009
    With all due respect, I understand that all stories can't have a happy ending and this was well written and all but your logic for writing it baffles me. If you can't see Rin with Sesshoumaru due to his Personality (which changes quite a bit towards humans, especially Rin, during the course of the series) and lifespan (which obviously wasn't a problem with his dad, nor does it seem to be a problem for him since he kept Rin with him even after, in the anime, she mentioned the fact that she was going to die at some point and she has, in fact, died twice) then how does it also make sense to write a yaoi about him, given that the only romantic relationship he had was with a woman from his past and no one has managed to touch his heart since but Rin? Honestly, the easiest way most fanfiction writers go OOC is when they write yaoi/yuri. I am not bashing the genre but for some reason, it never seems to occur to people that changing a characters sexual orientation also counts as changing their personality (it's not like trying on a new pair of shoes).

    I'll give you props on decent writing, though you wrote Sesshoumaru more as if he were female phobic instead of not knowing how to deal with Rin. But, yes, you did shoot yourself in the foot and it was with that glaring double-standard in your ending comments.
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  • From ANON - swasdiva on September 03, 2009
    One of the freaking best Sess/Rin fics I've ever read. Honest, realistic and riveting, you wrote Sesshoumaru's thoughts with a fitting, melancholic elegance that send my heart spinning. The line "I've had moods that lasted longer than that." literally took my breath away for a moment; that one line puts the entire piece into stark perspective. His silent agony is palpable, because he's so past the point of acknowledging it. My heart aches for both of them. Brilliant writing!!
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