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Reviews for Serpents and Dog Demons

By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - truth on February 02, 2010
    i feel like it should be a draw and they are both hurt equally
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  • From butterflies1974 on January 25, 2010
    I would make their fight a tie because both are very strong and it would hurt the balance of Alpha. So maybe InuYasha could stop it...maybe it triggers his maturity or something. Because I realy don't want Sess to be defeated...I like the arogant demon. Maybe Naruku comes and try something. That is just my opinion...anyway great chapter.
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  • From yaoilovefan on January 25, 2010
    I don't want Sesshy to lose!!! Make the result even. Or they could stop fighting when Sesshoumaru sees that Ban is strong and can protect Inuyasha. Although the Alpha issue is hard. Since Sesshoumaru had to let go of Inuyasha as a son, it might be hard for him to let go of the fact that he should be the pupies Alpha.
    I think Sesshoumaru's expalnation was good. The fact that he actually considered Izaoy even if for a brief moment was so sweet and tragic.
    I really enjoyed this chapter and waiting for the next one. Inuyasha will surely enjoy watching his poor excuse of a father getting knocked around for a bit. XDD
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  • From yaoilovefan on January 22, 2010
    I don't know where this is going but I think you're a genius! Sesshoumaru Inuyasha's father!!!! XD That is just great! XDD I have so many ideas running through my head right now! Was he trying to protect Inuyasha? Would our puppy have been killed by thers if the yokai society found out that the future Lord of the West has a Hanyou son? Making Inuyasha Seshoumaru's brother was safer if the Hanyou was in danger. Now he's strong and can defend himself. Is that it? Or close? XD I'll wait and see what you came up with. I'm also very curious now about Inuyasha's mother. Seshoumaru loved her? Or was it just a mistake form his point of view that he took her and didn't think she will become pregnant? I really hope he had some affection for her. Inuyasha would be furious with him for not helping her and letting her die just like that but I still think that even so it would be better. And more dramatic. Um... it would also mean that Seshoumaru cared for Inuyasha more than he wants to admit. Wanting him safe in that twisted way, making himself be the utter bastart, everything so that Inuyasha could grew strong... I like this Sesshoumaru. XD
    Okay, I'll wait and see where you're go with the story. XD Great work!
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  • From ANON - truth on January 16, 2010
    I have been reading your story recently and I have to say that last chapter was a total shock. I was for sure you were going to write something else, but this was perfect. I cannot wait till the next chapter.
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  • From butterflies1974 on January 16, 2010
    SESS IS INU FATHER!!!!!!! Wow, you certainly know how to shake up a story and that was a shake-up...please don't leave me hanging to long I just have to know what is going on. So many questions...

    You are a brilliant writer...trapping me again in the tale you weave.
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  • From ANON - Sara on January 13, 2010
    Wonderful story!! I can't wait to see what happens next, please update soon!
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  • From mrk33 on January 03, 2010
    Really enjoying this story. A few errors here and there, but nothing major.
    See you next chappie!
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  • From ANON - Midnights Scream on December 27, 2009
    SOOOOOOOOOOOO cute!!!!! I love Ban and his kindness to Inuyasha. They're cute together and I like that Inuyasha is learning and gaining a little confidence. I wonder when Sesshomaru will appear again and how that will play out. Super great job!
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  • From ANON - Midnights Scream on December 27, 2009
    What happened to Inuyasha? How will he get back? what will this mean?! I'm glad that Ban was there to take care of things. great job!
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  • From ANON - Midnights Scream on December 27, 2009
    I've never watched the Getbackers. I love your writing though. Such a great job! I'm glad Ban seems to understand Inuyasha. great job!
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  • From Shaquana on December 22, 2009
    Love your story!! I check almost everyday to see if you've updated it!! Please post another chappie soon!
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  • From butterflies1974 on December 21, 2009
    So SWWWEEEETTT! I got a tooth ache from it and I loved it! Thank you for a very good chapter and I look forward to more.
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  • From butterflies1974 on October 24, 2009
    Oh, MY!!!!! I love it! Gosh it was perfect how you did that. And Ban could have kept him little but he didn't because he likes him the way he is. And the Sess part was brilliant. I look forward to more.
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  • From kmoaton on October 23, 2009
    So Sess was feeling guilty and jealous? Good for him! I'm glad to see Inuyasha back to his adult form even though him as a child was adorable. This was a wonderful chapter and I look forward to more.
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