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Reviews for Strength

By : ajj77sunhawk
  • From ANON - Caitriona on February 17, 2011
    What a cliffie! Two probably adorable pups just waiting on their papa to love them and what does he do? Passes out! You can't stop here. Please!!

    On a more calm and rational note, this was a lovely chapter. I found myself stopping to try to think of what the 30 things he wasn't supposed to do were -- and giggling to myself over a number of them. I found myself trying to think of the 7 he was supposed to do - and hoping that loving and accepting the love of Sessy was one of the biggies. I enjoyed the detail and thorougness of the chapter, and you know I love the concept behind your version of male birthing.

    Nice stuff and I'm patiently waiting on an update, even though I check almost every other day, just in case. :D
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  • From wyntermist70 on February 17, 2011
    Man this is awesome I love this story Inu finally had the pups can't wait to see how shessy will save him keep you the awesome writing.......
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  • From Elvira on February 17, 2011
    I loved it! The wiggiling wonder? :O Hehehe.
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  • From myperversities on February 17, 2011
    I love your detail!!! This chapter was sooo good!! I can't believe you left us hanging once again though XD. Please hurry with the next installment!
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  • From ladytokyo on February 16, 2011
    Hi I love your stories but on ff.net this author has stolen your story LazyBones89 and the name is called power. I just wanted to let you know


    ladytokyo aka Shivonne
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  • From nchsmi on February 16, 2011
    Sweetie I don't know if u r aware of this, but that piece of trash just posted this story and called it Power! This witch is truly out of pocket! I swear something really needs 2 b done about her ass!
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  • From wizzy891 on February 16, 2011
    Some Person Hadd Stoled Your Story & Called It Their Ownn...LazyBone Somethinq.
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  • From ANON - T'Amara on February 13, 2011
    Instinct told ME to check for an update,and holymoley, the dream the Elder Gods sent everybody was BONECHILLING, and they all had it for multiple nights??? It would make anyone scared to death and practically crazed with it. But I LOVE the way they keep it from the children and Inu, and the confrontation with the Elders, led by our little Naoya, was deligthful! That's one heck of a baby God, but hey, our Hanyou are all TOUGH. And I was pleased the gods left Inu with enough youkai to deal at least with the pulses... Also totally, TOTALLY pleased with the way the entire Castle reacts, one solid, strong, loving bunch of folks. They're practically worthy of Inuyasha himself... THEN YOU ENDED THE CHAPTER AS THE BIRTH STARTS.

    AAAAAAAAACKKKKK

    Although Valentine's Day WOULD be a lovely time to read of a successful, safe birthing.

    Much love and SPEED to your writing,
    T'Amara
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  • From ardentes on February 12, 2011
    You fucking scared the shit out of me! Damn it! After I realized it was a dream/vision, then I calmed down. I find it interesting that the gods don't actually know the future, and like that a lot. I really liked this chapter, even though it scared the hell out of me in the beginning of this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! Please update soon! I really want to know if Inuyasha and the infants will be okay. I appreciate the long chapter but I know that I am far too impatient for my own good, thusly wanting to read more. However, please update soon! I really want to see what happens. This story sucks the reader in and doesn't let go. Sometimes I've thought of messaging you to make sure you're still alive. I wish you luck on the next chapter. Sorry for rambling!
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  • From Vyper on February 12, 2011
    I hope Inuyasha lives through this birth. Inuyasha is so strong and his children not to mention Sesshoumaru would be so lost without him.
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  • From midnightsweet on February 12, 2011
    that was not funny at all. what r u trying to do kill people with that opening. than the endding. man if i could fine you i would yell like inu tell u updated. soory. update soon. please and thank you. that was cute with the kids and all. nicely done.
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  • From jdbbrz27 on February 12, 2011
    Wow what an emotional roller coaster at first I was so upset when I thought the dream was real although really great job on writing there. And then the confrontation between the baby god and his siblings and the 3 grown gods again marvelous indeed and if they could have helped Inuyasha by giving him a touch of youki than the jerks should have done so before then and the participation of all the other youki joining together to protect our sweet Inuyasha I cried like a baby. But now well now I want Inuyasha to have his puppies and to finally be healthy and well and for Sessh to give Inuyasha everything he needs for it please your killing me here and I love this story and your amazing imagination thank you.
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  • From midnightsweet on February 01, 2011
    ok ok ok yes. loved it. will done. now we can have the pups and end the story. for a new one. lol lol lol
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  • From ANON - varjo on January 31, 2011
    Gee, I wonder how he guessed so acurately... No balconies. I'm wondering why Shess doesn't have in complete bedrest yet...

    Thank you for the update.
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  • From Vyper on January 30, 2011
    I hope Yuusha and Sesshoumaru would start acting like Father and son rather then like enemies. Yuusha has quite the attitude around his Father and it is kind of sad since Inuyasha really needs his pups to get along with their Father so he can heal properly without worrying so much. I believe Sesshoumaru can save Inuyasha and I hope that sometime soon Inuyasha will get better. By the way, great chapter.
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