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Reviews for Initiation

By : Angels9191
  • From Nesha85 on August 17, 2010
    Good work increasing the length of the chapter. I really like the chacater development. But I can not wait to read the next chapter. I want to know if Sesshomaru is as cold as he acts and if she passes the test will he let her in the pack.
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on August 16, 2010
    *SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* a very very good chapter!!!! Yeah, That's right Inu-SERVANTS you leave Mizuki ALONE!!!! Great great chapter I can't wait to see what this initiation thing is!!! You're keeping your readers in suspense!!!!!! ...that's. Good thing in an author you sly fox! Well, as usual, I'll be pining for the next chapter!! If I don't review after the next chapter, its because I died not knowing what happened to Mizuki!!!!! *flails arms crazily* lol just kidding ;)
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  • From FalaAmaris on August 16, 2010
    Another really good chapter! I hope someone else will be nice to Mizuki too. It's sad that Kat-sama is the only one.

    Oooh, and what a mystery you've made, with who his mother is! I'm very curious now. :)
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  • From Nesha85 on August 02, 2010
    I think she should do the test. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will join? You have written Sesshoumaru character very well. I enjoy reading so write more soon. Also try to write longer chapters. Thanks
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  • From FalaAmaris on August 01, 2010
    Wooo! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. *dances*
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on August 01, 2010
    Whoo!! I'm helpful!! ^.^ oh Mizuki is a really good name I love it!! And now: reviewing! I think it's cruel but a good story line the way Sesshy treats Mizuki. (YAY a name!!) but Kat (oh I'm so calling him Kat) is such a nice guy!!!! He lends out kimonos, gives her food, says if you offer your body you can be free... Well that last one kind of sucks but whatever! Still an amazing story!!! Good luck with the experimentations with italics, and I'll be anxiously waiting for a new chapter!
    ~Christi
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  • From Nesha85 on July 23, 2010
    I am interested in what Sesshoumaru will have her do for her test. But I think it is too soon for a test considering that she can not even stay awake.
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  • From midcat on July 22, 2010
    Wow!! I really like the way this is going! The characters are intriguing and the plot is really good!! Now I am piqued, I want to know what sort of tests will Sesshomaru have the little Inu do in order to prove herself. And there are so many questions! Who is she? Where did she come from? Who is her family? How did she land in the hands of the slavers? Will Sesshomaru's son develop feelings for her or her for him?

    I am really looking forward to your next update!

    Thank you for writing and sharing!
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  • From FalaAmaris on July 21, 2010
    Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what the test will be. I hope she does a good job!
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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 21, 2010
    No I don't know about italics I am sorry. Maybe, instead of italics, for whatever you were going to use italics for you could always use ***** astricks!!! **this could mean thought past or whatever!**

    I am honored you mentioned me! That's so cool!!! I will be anxiously waiting for another amazing chapter! Quick question: does our new half demoness have a name?? And if not, maybe you could go to the link below! (and if you have a name and I didn't notice it.. Wow I'm oblivious!!!!)

    http://www.20000-names.com/

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  • From InuZutaraFan1031 on July 19, 2010
    Oohhhhhh more please!!! I love the first two chapters!!!! So the Inu Youkai that found the girl is Sesshomaru's son???
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  • From FalaAmaris on July 17, 2010
    I really like it so far! I can't wait for the next chapter~
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  • From Nesha85 on July 15, 2010
    I like the story. I was really sad for the inu girl and now I happy that she was saved. Now I can not wait to see how Sesshoumaru reacts to her.
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  • From Snowpeach on July 11, 2010
    I luffs it :) I know it might be demented but i am anxiously awaiting more :D
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  • From Denara88 on July 08, 2010
    very interesting beginning. i look forward to finding out who the hanyou is
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