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By : LordYouko
  • From SammyJams on January 01, 2020

    Love this story - wish it wasn't abandoned!


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  • From kougaslover on March 09, 2011
    Aww, poor Inuyasha. I like that Sesshomaru is giving Inuyasha that bit of comfort when he needs it, it shows he's a good dominant for Inuyasha. Brutal and sadistic, but then what else would do for such a tempermental dog like Inu? I hope Sesshomaru does come to realize his deeper feelings for Inu soon, as it seems to be tearing the poor pup apart. Great chapter, I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - dragon1727 on January 30, 2011
    please write more, this is a really good story...
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  • From ANON - Tepi85 on November 11, 2010
    Can you write a chapter on the details of chapter 1 Para 4 (starting from the bottom) Expaining the details of this actually happening..... how Sesshomaru does this?
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  • From NelaniDC on November 08, 2010
    Aww you can't end it here :-(
    Poor InuYasha. I feel so bad for him (*sigh*)
    Can't wait to read the next chappie ^ ^
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  • From kougaslover on November 08, 2010
    Aww, poor Inuyasha. I do hope Sesshomaru returns to him soon, and hopefully gives him the punishment and then the comfort he so desperately needs. I have to say, as sad as this chapter is, it's so brilliantly in character for both of them, and it's so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Excellent, excellent work, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - ILoveWyatt on October 20, 2010
    I love it!

    Cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - natasha on September 27, 2010
    great chapie, so can't wait for more.
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  • From Onyxlight on September 12, 2010
    The sound echoes in the quiet night, as if the universe holds its breath to listen to the hanyou break.

    What a beautifully haunting line...I like this fic and I can't wait until you update!
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  • From kougaslover on September 09, 2010
    Aww, Sess loves his little brother, in his own sadistic way. That was so brutally sweet, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2010
    Love the kinkiness, different from all the other stories & nicely done.
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  • From ANON - natasha on August 21, 2010
    really great chappie soooo can't wait for more to come out of this story.
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  • From ANON - chibinelly on August 20, 2010
    Thanks for the update.
    Sesshoumaru is really sadistic but he does care somewhat for his brother. That's why he doesnt want others to hurt him. He's just too arrogant enough to admit it to himself. But I really hope he would at least stop verbally abusing Inuyasha. It hurts him more than phisical abuse.
    Great chapter !
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  • From ANON - chibinelly on August 20, 2010
    I just started reading this fic and I really like it. I feel so bad for Inuyasha. Poor Inuyasha. I get angry with Sesshoumaru for punishing him so.
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  • From maegerakawaii on August 20, 2010
    I don't really know how I feel after reading these chapters. I feel saddened yet thrilled. Inuyasha's blind adoration is really endearing but it makes me want to cry at the same time. Sesshoumaru is acting like how I picture he would in real life but I kind of hope he is OOC just so Inuyasha could heal. On the other hand, I can't help but like Sesshoumaru for still being an ass. I am so CONFUSED. The only thing I'm not confused about is that I want to read more. Please keep it up.
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