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Reviews for Poor Jaken

By : AmberDDawn
  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2014
    IT WAS NOT FUNNY, IT WAS PAINFUL. JUST CAUSE JAKEN'S UGLY DONT MEAN HE CANT BE HAPPY. END I LOVE THE ENDING
    SESSY'S VASSAL IS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE IN THIS STORY. AND HE DISERVES SOME HAPINES IN HIS LONLY LIFE ..... AND A MATE
    HOPE TO READ MORE STORYS FROM YOU, CAUSE SO FAR I LIKE
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  • From Pumpkinpi on November 07, 2010
    Its very entertaining and different, I would like to see where this story goes!
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  • From Vyper on October 23, 2010
    This story was great although it would have been interesting seeing what the babies looked like since they were both frog and kappa. But enough with the disturbing visuals. Thanks and thank you for not allowing my beautiful Sesshoumaru to mate with Jaken. That would be totally wrong.
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  • From Vyper on October 22, 2010
    As much as I love lemons this one was interesting to say the least although the visual was quite disturbing. For some odd reason I am fine with this and hope you continue writing.
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  • From Ann10550 on October 21, 2010
    Please include a lemon...You have brought us this far... just complete the story arc and give us a lemon. Even Jaken deserves happy time after his trials.
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  • From Vyper on October 20, 2010
    Stupid snake demon. I am glad that one is dead.
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  • From Vyper on October 20, 2010
    Sounds like even the healer went completely nuts over Jaken. It seems the toad demon has some redeeming qualities in protecting his Lovely.
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  • From Vyper on October 19, 2010
    Seems like poor Sesshoumaru is going to have to let his retainer go. Poor Jaken just can't control his little self.
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  • From wyntermist70 on October 17, 2010
    OHhhh my gosh yes I want more I love this take on poor jaken and trust me your title speak for it all this dude is having a hard time I wouldn't want that fat frog on me but please update. I would like to know what happens to the poor thing.........
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  • From Vyper on October 17, 2010
    It is interesting that Jaken would be considered quite young. In the show he is treated like an elder mainly by Rin, but that makes sense since she is a young human girl. I feel though that Jaken being loyal to Sesshoumaru should remain by Sesshoumaru's side. He does indeed owe a life debt to Sesshoumaru not only once, but twice since Sesshoumaru brought him back to life after Kyjimbo had killed him. If you do push forward with the frog mating Jaken I would think that hitting one's mate will have to be abolished along with raping ones mate. It would be terribly sad to have Jaken raped by anyone. I know I have used rape in my stories, but it is usually a bad person doing it since only evil people rape people.
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  • From Ann10550 on October 16, 2010
    Jaken should end up mated. Why should he always be a servant and seen as ugly when the Toad Lord sees him as a beauty?
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  • From Vyper on October 15, 2010
    Jaken is just having a terrible time. Poor little guy. Almost raped and now injured. I hope he will get better soon.


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  • From Vyper on October 15, 2010
    I feel for Jaken. He really believes his Lord Sesshoumaru will save him.
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  • From ANON - yaoiandcoffeeaddict on October 14, 2010
    I love how cute Jaken is in this. I wonder how Rin will react when she realizes something is wrong.
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  • From Confu183 on October 12, 2010
    Poor Jaken indeed! I feel so bad for him, and I have a feeling things are only going to get worse for him as well. xD
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